| Reviews for RedSkinned Apple Eyes |
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buffy102 chapter 3 . 3/25/2010 Loved it! it was so funny! looking forward to more of you in the future! P/S: I agree that penis is an akward word. I don't like it either. I hate when it's used in fanfiction. |
mataharitenshi chapter 3 . 3/20/2010 Okay, so... this is actually the first one I read earlier tonight, but I wasn't really in a position to start writing a review yet so I waited. And then I started reading them all and leaving a review for each. XD My mind, she works in mysterious ways... I L-O-V-E the concept (just the concept even!) of a threesome with these boys. It is so freaking hot to me that I have been contemplating for 6 months writing something with them all together. -sigh- You have such a way with words and actions when it comes to the sexy parts. And once again BB is characterized in a magnificent way. I can tell you think like him to a degree but that's okay because I feel crazy like him half of the time. Doesn't everyone contemplate going on a homicidal rampage when they're pissed? No? Well, anyway I love this one THE BEST. My favorite so far. Just delicious... *eats fic up* Needs some creme. XD |
thunDaClap chapter 3 . 4/16/2009 lol pongo. |
bishieholic chapter 3 . 4/14/2009 BWAHA, my dirty mind is sated (for now), thanks for that! Light is so spoiled XD My favourite B line (kehe, B line - beeline! lolwhut?): “I make a spectacular train-driver, don’t I? Master of Orgasm-Triggering Dominoes. Quite a title, isn’t it?” 'Nuff said. Oh man, these steamy scenes are so masterful and amazing, mainly cuz they're all sexy and connected, but you also added wicked humor! -worships- Superseme B, he must be happy for being allowed such a lovely break from his cage. Keep writing, you are magical! |
bishieholic chapter 2 . 4/14/2009 Oh hell and I thought having L dressed in drag was the birthday present of a lifetime, but adding B to the party too? You are magical, keep writing yaoi magic WHICH I'm guessing is in the next chapter -senses it- |
bishieholic chapter 1 . 4/14/2009 AHHAHA! Yes, since Light is so damn smart 'n' suave, getting a hard-on during a lecture and ignoring girls is no problem for him! Er - maybe it is... I hope you're happy I'm reviewing cuz right now I'm way too excited to get the yaoi- you're writing is so fun to read, all this talk about strawberries and cream XD |
The Apple's Pie chapter 3 . 3/16/2009 That was wonderful for a first lemon~! Great work~! |
M.S DARK ANGEL chapter 3 . 3/16/2009 woaw! excellent smex scene! write more pretti, pretti plz! _ |
Dotti55 chapter 1 . 3/16/2009 Ok now you HAVE to finish this. I absolutely love the character you've given Light, I really do. And I need to see more about that cream licking stuff...LOL...so more please? |
Guest chapter 1 . 3/16/2009 LOL |
BalanceBlue chapter 3 . 3/16/2009 ohmygod, that was hilarious at the end! nice job - |
BalanceBlue chapter 2 . 3/16/2009 lol, i was pretty sure that B was gonna show up! well, i got ta go read the last chapter. nice job! love the story - |
SciFiSlashFreak chapter 3 . 3/15/2009 Master of Orgasm-Triggering Dominoes Thats whenever someone say's B I will correct them and make them cal him that. LOL suriously how could I NOT love astory that is B, L, Light smexyness. Loved it... what more can I say? |
deathnoteno1fan-codegeasslover chapter 3 . 3/15/2009 I cant say im estatec about the three some but it was HOT! UP-DATE!REAL!SOON! |
M.S DARK ANGEL chapter 2 . 3/9/2009 umm...a 3-some? haha! that would be funny! write more plz! _ |