| Reviews for A Visit To The Optometrist |
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  MidnightWiddow87 chapter 9 . 3/8/2017 1 word... UPDATE! PLEASE! WHY THE CLIFFHANGER?! ANSWER ME ARCEUS! ... Okay I'm done... Oh and dose that prove how much I loved this book? |
| More chapter 9 . 8/12/2015 More |
 Barcha chapter 9 . 7/16/2015 Oh no a wild clighanger ask appeared |
| pokemonLOVER69 chapter 7 . 1/4/2013 mewraikouannoying as fucking hell lol |
| pokemonLOVER69 chapter 6 . 1/4/2013 ha who would ever send a sudo-legendary to do a real legendaries job |
| pokemonLOVER69 chapter 5 . 1/4/2013 arceus knows all dun dun dunnn |
| pokemonLOVER69 chapter 4 . 1/4/2013 "Will you marry me i possibly love you." lol |
| pokemonLOVER69 chapter 3 . 1/4/2013 i am just guessing that mesprit is the most evil pokemon ever |
| pokemonLOVER69 chapter 2 . 1/4/2013 omg they are being watch by a pokemon wish real life was like that |
| pokemonLOVER69 chapter 1 . 1/4/2013 ooooooo the optometrist |
| Cloudwhite Eevee chapter 1 . 12/1/2012 I have now come to the conclusion that Mesprit is pure evil |
| RegisteredAccount chapter 9 . 9/29/2012 Wow, this story is quite... interesting in a way. The way how you narrate the story and the feelings both Azelf and Uxie has... is perfect! This story is awesome. Hope you update soon! |
| DiabolosUltima chapter 9 . 9/29/2012 Wow, I hope you can update this story soon... It's good! |
| pikachucat chapter 9 . 9/7/2012 cool please write more |
| Whim chapter 1 . 7/15/2012 Could you maybe start existing again? The Hero of Flora - Whim |
