Reviews for The Concubine
meincher chapter 6 . 10/30/2012
Why'd you stop? :[

Please write more. By the way, I'm getting the vibe that Sasori is not much interested in Deidara.
meincher chapter 3 . 10/30/2012
I like it; you're so witty!

Deidara and Hidan hugging would be the most hilarious thing ever.

I am looking forward to some SasoDei. :3
meincher chapter 2 . 10/30/2012
This is quite good! I like it so far. It was very funny too, especially the prostitute and birth dates part. I can't help but feel that Deidara has a bit more...uh...I don't know, attitude, I guess, for lack of a better term. I don't think he'd be so subservient. Of course, I'm no expert or anything.

Anyway, I'm enjoying this.
DeeaE chapter 6 . 10/22/2010
I freaking love this storyyyyyyyyyyyy!
Bloodstainedhowl chapter 6 . 6/5/2010
Ohhhh~ cant wait ot hear more un! D
Keono chapter 6 . 5/15/2010
I think Sori's gonna back down! Sorry Sori, but Dei has to be with you!

And I get the amulet! It's like it contains him, but I have no idea how it got onto "Logan" pfft, I think Dei will find a way to take over!
Keono chapter 5 . 5/15/2010
Oh no! The amulet holds his life!
Keono chapter 4 . 5/15/2010
Oh no Dei has to be a sex slave! I thought that the concubine was a wife! I miss read the description!
Keono chapter 3 . 5/15/2010
One time I asked my mom that when I was like 10 I was like "Mom, what's a transvestite?" and my dad answered "A fag." and my mom freaked out and told him to be quite and she answered "A man who dresses like a girl." and then I'm like. "What's a fag?" lol good times!
Keono chapter 2 . 5/15/2010
lol Dei was a wife for a king! I find that funny and interesting!
Keono chapter 1 . 5/15/2010
I like it a lot so far!

In my opinion the best way to start a new story, is to do a supernatural one, the ones that catch peoples attention!
gothss123 chapter 6 . 1/18/2010
i really like it hope theres more
elany chapter 6 . 12/14/2009
*giggle* ah it's always so much fun with akatsuki... XD

Can't wait to see what happens next D

Keep up the good work and update soon
SaNgO-ShIpPo chapter 6 . 11/28/2009
I liked it!update soon!xD
Thy Blue Pen Cap chapter 6 . 11/8/2009
Well...This is very interesting so far!
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