Reviews for The Concubine |
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meincher chapter 6 . 10/30/2012 Why'd you stop? :[ Please write more. By the way, I'm getting the vibe that Sasori is not much interested in Deidara. |
meincher chapter 3 . 10/30/2012 I like it; you're so witty! Deidara and Hidan hugging would be the most hilarious thing ever. I am looking forward to some SasoDei. :3 |
meincher chapter 2 . 10/30/2012 This is quite good! I like it so far. It was very funny too, especially the prostitute and birth dates part. I can't help but feel that Deidara has a bit more...uh...I don't know, attitude, I guess, for lack of a better term. I don't think he'd be so subservient. Of course, I'm no expert or anything. Anyway, I'm enjoying this. |
DeeaE chapter 6 . 10/22/2010 I freaking love this storyyyyyyyyyyyy! |
Bloodstainedhowl chapter 6 . 6/5/2010 Ohhhh~ cant wait ot hear more un! D |
Keono chapter 6 . 5/15/2010 I think Sori's gonna back down! Sorry Sori, but Dei has to be with you! And I get the amulet! It's like it contains him, but I have no idea how it got onto "Logan" pfft, I think Dei will find a way to take over! |
Keono chapter 5 . 5/15/2010 Oh no! The amulet holds his life! |
Keono chapter 4 . 5/15/2010 Oh no Dei has to be a sex slave! I thought that the concubine was a wife! I miss read the description! |
Keono chapter 3 . 5/15/2010 One time I asked my mom that when I was like 10 I was like "Mom, what's a transvestite?" and my dad answered "A fag." and my mom freaked out and told him to be quite and she answered "A man who dresses like a girl." and then I'm like. "What's a fag?" lol good times! |
Keono chapter 2 . 5/15/2010 lol Dei was a wife for a king! I find that funny and interesting! |
Keono chapter 1 . 5/15/2010 I like it a lot so far! In my opinion the best way to start a new story, is to do a supernatural one, the ones that catch peoples attention! |
gothss123 chapter 6 . 1/18/2010 i really like it hope theres more |
elany chapter 6 . 12/14/2009 *giggle* ah it's always so much fun with akatsuki... XD Can't wait to see what happens next D Keep up the good work and update soon |
SaNgO-ShIpPo chapter 6 . 11/28/2009 I liked it!update soon!xD |
Thy Blue Pen Cap chapter 6 . 11/8/2009 Well...This is very interesting so far! |