the title is nasty.

-Nipple Flames of Gilgamesh!

WOW this story was A-M-A-Z-I-N-G. Its short but you should continue. This is what I tell the writters. Dont take it bad, but just as a commnet or advice, ok if you want you can write short chapters but update soon, or you can writte really long chapters so you dont have to updfate everytime. Either way is perfect. But you dont have to do what I tell you unless you do. (: I hope you can continue soon. I really love yoir story, I can tell it will be a good story.

Update please I wanna know whats gonna happen

Aw Yaya for Bella and the restaurant :D I loved the chapter it was amazing :)

cool chapter want to here more about carter.

melly black

Amazing chapter really i can't wait to see how you expand your amazing writing skills over the story amazing love it please upload again as soon as possible x

nice job on bella's pespective. it sound alot like how stephanie meyer would write it. please keep writng chapters for all of ur stories. :)

NoAverageAngel

That's really good! cont.

I like this Aw Poor Bella :( I feel so sorry for her :D

keep writing this goldmine!