ohh i like it, Luffy was not too OOC and Smoker was uncharacteristically nice hahah.

Just re-read this story again and it was as good as I remember. It was more than just pretty nice. The way you wrote Luffy, Nami and all the little details, it felt realistic and I loved that.

Thanks for writing this one.

A-freaking-dorable!

I feel like that says it all

Mon dieu eblouissant et la fin de t'es histoires sont toujours a couper le souffle franchement je suis agréablement surprise ! Les répliques que tu leur donne sont tellement belles ! Bravo ! Continu comme ça vraiment je serai la pour te lire jusqu'au bout ! Tu as l'air d'apprécier particulièrement nami c'est mon gars aussi haha

AMAZİNNNGGGGGG! ! Olor every bit of it! My heart as pounding every second while reading this and I couldn't get rid of that fat smile on my face! It was sooo cute thanks for sharing this with us you're awesome!

Any expectations I had for this fic were blown away by a cannon and sunk down in the ocean faster than a Devil Fruit user. Consider how my expectations were low to begin with, this is a SUPER thing! XD Luffy's little proposal at the end was so utterly him that I couldn't help but squeal from its cuteness. All in all, I love this fic! XD

Nice. This is a nice story, one of those story you can't really classify as drama or suspense or even romantic. It's just nice. Like the movie Big Fish.

D'awwww.

AWESOME

I rather poetic story. I like it a lot. good work *thumbs Up*

If in the end Luffy does end up with Nami this how the proposal would be blunt but in the same time sincere.I laughed at the beginning because of Ussop and what I like the best was that the characters were so JOB!

Fav scene:

"Since I left my village, the only direction I've been going is with you," he continued, sounding as though he was starting to confuse himself. "I like that direction, and I want to go that way for the rest of my life."

nicely done! i would love to see a wedding between Luffy and Nami done by you! good job again :D

I really have to applaud you for somehow managing to have Luffy stay mostly in character.

Most romantic fanfic about Nami and Luffy end up skewing Luffy personality alot since frankly, Luffy and Romance goes together about as well as tomato sauce and chocolate ice cream.

Not that it's such a stretch of imagination for someone to fall for Luffy, but Luffy being romantic?

The proposal is blunt, to the point, yet sweet without any intention of making it so. It suits Luffy rather well.

Nice :)

It was quite long but it was wonderful and worth it. Please do make some more stories if you'll have time. Keep up the great work! Ja ne~ v(-)