ok this is good but a few problems
1. pretty sure at this point kagome and inuyasha still in a relationship so the tony/kag thing is off-putting
2. her outfit was unnecessary and feels off from the character
3. kagome would not slap someone for saying she looks mad when cute she did that maybe once in the past and she was a kid then
4. maybe going a bit hard on the tony bashing. while he is an ass monkey sometimes he is the second highest ranked agent on the team for a reason, he puts in more work then almost anyone else bar a few moments

Hi read the whole thing and I'm like wow now it's been six years. I'm wanting more and wondering if you'll continue to write again or did the plot bunny die? Or is it running around?

Update soon, I love this story!

I wish you still updated I miss your work im sad you have abandoned it all

Well, this looks like another promising story that was put away and never touched again...
way too many of these I find...

You haven't updated since 2011. Have you abandoned this awesome story when you said you wouldn't?

i wish you updated the ncis/inuyasha fics i love them my favorite work of yours

Don't forget about this one! I oh so love it, as well.

I'm wondering if Sesshomaru is really a closet perv or if Shippo is making shit up? Though if he is, better he doesn't flaunt it about like a certain not-so-holy-man.

pleeeeeeeeaaaaaaaassssssssseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee more!

LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT! This story is my drug, it's so incredibly good. I love the pairings too _-

Shippo and Ziva shut get together ASAP

Dude I'm cracking up so bad! Hahahahahhaha Fluffy-sama! XD. Keep up the excellent work!

I'm die! This chapter is just tooooooooo funny. OMG I have tears in my eyes _

i miss your updates, the stories are so awesome and i wanna see tony and kagome get together and more shippo ziva

oh my... what twists i their lives...
hope to read more :)