We would’ve been fighting

Interesting

This is a good story so far. I really liked the concept behind the story, but I do find the way you narrate the story to be quite confusing. I find myself having to re-read parts in order to understand what is going on. Like one minute they're in a store looking to buy her new clothes, and the next gaara is confined in his office and there's no explanation as to why. I also wish there were more chapter breaks to separate scenes or character POVs. This is not by any means a flame. I love this story. just wish it was a little easier to read. Awesome job!

Gonna read this because it So far really good

I HATE SASUINO but I do love Gaasaku

Just read this chapter. Great introduction! Makes me want to read all the rest of the story

twins ! lets them have twins a boy and girl

i'm hopelessly in love with this fic omg! Finishing it only in one day gosh! it's worth it!

AWESOME

Wow didn't expect Sasuke to have such a part in this.

Well the 3 day thing makes since now.

You would think that would have been something she would remember -_-'.

OH L ORD JEE ZUS, THE SMUT! BY FAR THE B.E.S.T IVE EVER READ!

I sound like a chortling pig and ny eyes r all teary like jeezus, the pains of a force silent laugh...this is my fav chappy so far

Not sure if the (well written) smut s in this chappy or the previous nd im too lazy to search SO with that said let me just say, EPIC NOSEBLEED! Like wowzers that just perfectly sent me the message of wild sex with gaasaku and i am NOT disappointed, like at all. Another thing, im lovin the way shes handling it and the tense convo in the hokages room made me lol so hardim nt even sure if that was ur intention but if it was, i lold so...yea