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Werejaguar of Halloween Town chapter 27 . 6/7 Will we fans ever see this and Redux updated again? After the travesty that was the decisions of the Networks/FreshTV calling the shots with the last couple of seasons, the TD fandom has suffered greatly and many - including myself - would love to go back to a simpler time of solid character development, good writing, and previous ships that WERENT broken up for pointless hypocritical reasons. PLEASE MAN! I know on some of your profiles you cheekily state that your lazy, but it’s been so long! And a lot of the fanfics that are coming out are such crap because most of it is by fans that only now the dumpster fire that were the last couple of seasons! Reach out to us, dude, let us know if this and Redux are dead or up for adoption or being donated to a fellow TDI loving writer that you know will do these stories justice! |
Guest chapter 32 . 3/27 Story idea: Ezekiel was horrified that night because he was having a nightmare. When he was at playa de losers Eva used him as a punching bag which hurt him physically and emotionally. Ever since that happened Eva was his number one fear in life. While he apologized to most of the girls for his sexist comments he was still too scared to approach Eva. Now he was even more terrified. The reason why she was forced to go back to camp Wawanakwa was because of a video of he and Heather on a fake date. Ezekiel was positive that when Eva returned she would assume it was his fault and be all over him. He was worried that when she returned he was going to get killed. He was having a nightmare about Eva chasing him around the school. GET BACK HERE YOU SO I CAN KICK YOUR ASS YOU SEXIST PRICK! shouted Eva in his dream. Ezekiel was so scared he started peeing. He was asleep so he didn't know he was doing it. It started out small and then it started to soak his boxers. Pee was coming out of him and was filling up his underwear. Then it started spreading outwards and began filling his pants. His pajama pants were filled with pee as he continued to let it out of him. After his underwear and pajama pants were completely drenched it started spreading around his bed. Then it went onto the floor making a huge puddle. The pee kept spreading and spreading. Then it slid under the door and into the hallway. Ezekiel would not stop peeing. Then it slid under the door that went into Gwen's room. Before long a huge puddle was formed around Gwen's room until he finally stopped peeing. Gwen sniffed something and woke up. She looked down on the floor and saw a giant pile of pee. She then saw it led out into the hallway. Someone must have wet the bed she thought. She stepped out into the hallway and saw it was coming from Ezekiel's room. She stepped inside and found him fast asleep. She gently tapped him on the forehead. Ezekiel slowly opened his eyes and saw Gwen standing beside his bed. He then felt wet and sticky from the waist down and looked under the covers and on the floor. Did I just pee my pants? asked Ezekiel. It's more than your pants said Gwen. It spread throughout the hallway into my bedroom said. Ezekiel then had small tears in his eyes. Gwen patted him on the back of the head. It's okay everyone pees the bed, i'm not mad at you she said. Yeah when they are like two years old said Ezekiel. He continued to sob as Gwen patted him on the head. I also had a nightmare last night said Ezekiel. What happened? asked Gwen. Eva was still angry at me for my sexist comments from day one and she was chasing me said Ezekiel. I'm pretty sure she's over that by now said Gwen. Besides, she was nice enough to give you those video games. It doesn't help the fact that my fake date with Heather is the reason why she had to go back to that crappy island said Ezekiel. I think maybe if you talked to Eva and explained how you felt she would understand said Gwen. Ezekiel then started panicking and breathing heavily. No way, if she knows i'm afraid of her she'll use that against me. Alright we'll talk about this later, for now why don't you go wash up and i'll clean up this mess. You have to promise you won't tell anyone, especially Eva said Ezekiel. Your secret is safe with me said Gwen. Ezekiel then walked into the boys bathroom feeling embarrassed. He stepped into the shower stall and took off his clothes. As he let the warm water run down his naked body he was thinking about whether or not Gwen was going to keep her promise. After he finished his shower he went back to bed. The night after that he had the same nightmare. He woke up when he felt another tap and his forehead. He felt wet again and saw that once again Gwen was beside him with a giant pee puddle on the floor. Oh no not again said Ezekiel. Same nightmare? asked Gwen. Yeah i'm still scared about Eva said Ezekiel. You go and shower and i'll clean this up again said Gwen. You don't have to clean up after me said Ezekiel. It doesn't bother me in the slightest said Gwen. After Ezekiel took a shower and the mess was cleaned up Ezekiel had an idea the next morning. He went the whole day without drinking anything. He was very thirsty but he couldn't risk another accident. Unfortunately that night Gwen woke him up again and he realized he peed all over the place again. Maybe you need to see a doctor about your bed wetting said Gwen. After he showered and came back to his room to find it all clean he put another set of clean pajamas on. Instead of going to sleep again he had and idea. He thought if he was already injured then Eva would have no reason to hurt him. He then opened up his window and looked down. He jumped out the window and landed hard on his right arm. OOOOOWWWWW! she shouted. Everyone quickly ran downstairs to see Ezekiel on the ground just below his window. What happened? asked Harold. I got a splinter in my foot which caused me to lose my balance and fall out the window lied Ezekiel. Leshawna dialed 911 and soon the entire school was woken up by the sound of a medical helicopter. Gwen ran into Ezekiel's room and got his teddy bear from his bed for the trip to the hospital. As Ezekiel was put on a stretcher and loaded onto the helicopter Gwen came with him to make sure he was alright. Once they got to the hospital he was set in an x-ray to see what the damage was. You've broken your right arm and three of your ribs said the female doctor. After Ezekiel was carefully set in a hospital bed his right arm was put in a sling. Ezekiel then whispered into Gwen's ear what really happened and made her promise not to tell anyone. When Gwen got back to Richmore academy Ezekiel's injury was on the front page of the school paper. Chris announced that Ezekiel would not be competing in challenge nights until he got the all clear from the doctor. When everyone else got back from camp Wawanakwa Gwen looked at Eva filled with guilt. She wanted to tell Eva but didn't want Ezekiel to be in anymore pain. They all soon found about Ezekiel's injury and they were concerned, including Eva who was wondering how he even survived. Ezekiel lay in a hospital bed asleep with his teddy bear snuggled with him. He had happy thoughts knowing that he was safe from Eva. |
The destroyer chapter 32 . 1/11 Story idea: Heather was walking through the mall on the highest floor when she saw Ezekiel. She remembered how humiliated she was when everyone thought they were dating. She then thought of a way to get revenge on Ezekiel. As Ezekiel was looking down over the railing Heather got a running start and ran into Ezekiel. Ezekiel then started falling at a high rate of speed screaming all the way down. Then he finally landed on his left arm. OOOWWW! screamed Ezekiel. Sadie who was currently on her own because Katie was currently on a date with Noah saw it before anyone else and ran over to him before anyone else did. Everyone in the mall was horrified at what happened. Sadie knelt down next to Ezekiel and he immediately had tears in his eyes. Sadie knew about Ezekiel's history of having anxiety attacks really easily and pulling his toque down over his eyes. She couldn't imagine how horrified he was right now. Ezekiel then started bawling. WAAAAHHH! he cried. IT HURTS SO MUCH! Sadie then started patting Ezekiel on the head to calm him down. She knew that things were getting serious. It's going to be okay Zeke she said. Everything is going to be fine. Ezekiel still had tears in his eyes and they started going red from all the crying. Where does it hurt? asked Sadie. The entirety of my left arm said Ezekiel still crying. Don't worry i'll call 911 and they'll get you fixed up said Sadie. NO, I DON'T WANT TO GO BACK TO THAT HOSPITAL! he cried after remembering the experience he had with the hospital challenge. It's okay i'll be right with you the whole time said Sadie. Soon paramedics arrived on the scene and carefully started handling Ezekiel. They gently put him on a stretcher and carried him outside. Sadie followed closely. Then they were on a helicopter to be taken to the medical center. When they got to the hospital they carefully put Ezekiel in an x-ray and what they saw was horrifying. The bone in his arm was covered with cracks. There were cracks in every part of arm you can think of from the wrist to the shoulder. He's got a lot of popped blood vessels and veins inside of his arm said the female doctor. In order to repair the damage we'll have to surgically cut into his arm and put everything back into place. NO, I DON'T WANNA GO INTO SURGERY, THAT'S MY NUMBER ONE FEAR, MOST PEOPLE WHO GO INTO SURGERY NEVER WAKE UP, WAAAHHH! he cried. Ezekiel was now having in a fit with nothing but fear inside of him. Sadie knew that Ezekiel was horrified about what was going go down. She once again patted him on the head to get him to tone down. Is this your first surgery? she asked. Ezekiel slowly shook his head. Don't worry these people are professionals they know what they are doing she said. Ezekiel knew he had to be brave. They doctors took him to the operating room while Sadie waited outside. Ezekiel still scared to death had the gas mask put on his face and he fell asleep after the anesthesia did its job. Sadie then went back to Richmore academy where she found out the entire school was in outrage. Everyone was furious with Heather for scaring the crap out of Ezekiel. The Headmaster even gave her a strike for her actions and her parents had to be called in. Her parents decided that a six month grounding would be suitable. Chris decided to make and exception to the fine print. Ezekiel didn't have to compete in challenge nights until he made a full recovery no matter how long it took. Sadie then walked into Ezekiel's room and got something that she thought he might need. When she got back to the hospital Ezekiel was still in surgery. It was like that until 3:00 midnight. When the doctors stepped out of the room Sadie walked in to see Ezekiel's entire arm in a cast. He was fast asleep. When Sadie tapped him on the forehead. Ezekiel breathed a sigh in relief knowing that he survived. Ezekiel, I was really worried about you said Sadie. You got injured before I got to tell you that I love you. Ezekiel's eyes widened in shock upon hearing this. Iv'e had this minor crush on you for a couple of days and i'm glad it's finally off my chest said Sadie. Ezekiel smiled at her. I love you to Sadie he said. You were there for me when i thought it was over. I went back to Richmore to get this for you said Sadie. She then handed Ezekiel his teddy bear. Ezekiel smiled and hugged it as tight as he could. You wanna say we're officially dating? asked Sadie. With pleasure said Ezekiel. The two then shared a kiss on the lips. I love you Ezekiel said Sadie. I love you to Sadie said Ezekiel. Sadie left the room and Ezekiel went right to sleep while snuggling his bear. |
Guest chapter 32 . 12/16/2019 Story idea: When challenge night started up again Chris announced it was going to be a ten lap race around the one mile school running track. All contestants would run one lap around the track and the fastest time would start on the pole, second fastest would start second, and so forth. The winner would win the reward while last place would go into next week with a handicap. Eva qualified on the pole with Ezekiel in second and Heather in third. To increase drama Chris said that intentional contact would be allowed. When the race began Eva pulled out to a huge lead. She ultimately won with a huge lead while Ezekiel and Heather were only half way through turn one on the last lap. Heather then remembered how humiliated she was after everyone thought they were dating. Going into turn two she lost it. I AM NOT LOSING TO YOU AGAIN YOU SEXIST PRICK! she shouted. She then yanked Ezekiel's left arm and threw him upwards ten feet in the air. Ezekiel was now flying through the air at 20 mph. He then hit the infield grass hard and started flipping and barrel rolling through the grass at a high speed. When he finally slowed down and came to a complete stop there was a horrifying sight. Ezekiel had several tears in his clothes and was bleeding in several places. His flip left giant tears in the grass and he left behind a large trail of blood. Everyone except Heather was terrified and ran over to him in a panic. Ezekiel slowly opened his eyes revealing them to be completely red from all the popped blood vessels. OH MY GOD, EZEKIEL SPEAK TO ME! shouted Bridgette. Red tears slowly came out of his eyes. I...can't...move muttered Ezekiel. He then barfed out some blood. Well...guys...it...was...fun...while...it...lasted. DON'T SAY THAT EZEKIEL YOU CAN STILL MAKE IT! shouted Izzy. Bridgette then had tears in her eyes. THEY SAID THE SAME THING ABOUT MY DAD! she bawled out. At this point everyone except Heather had tears in their eyes. Even Eva the tough girl was crying. Jessica dialed 911 and soon an ambulance came. Paramedics slowly put Ezekiel on the stretcher and loaded him into the ambulance. The ambulance then drove off to the hospital. Chris then slowly went up to Eva. I don't know if now is a good time but here's your prize for winning he said as he handed Eva a $1000 gift card to Carterque. Eva then kicked Chris in the shin. WHY THE HELL DID YOU MAKE INTENTIONAL CONTACT LEGAL!? she demanded to know. She then went up to the headmaster to with a certain question. Heather is going to get expelled right? she asked. I'm sorry Eva but Chris did say intentional contact was allowed so there's nothing I can do said the headmaster. Like you care about homeschool said Chef. You just want to get rid of Heather. THAT'S NOT TRUE AT ALL! yelled Eva. She then looked over at Heather. She is going to get it next week she thought. Back at the hospital Ezekiel was having a gas mask put over his face to begin surgery. The doctors were wondering if he was ever going to wake up. The next morning everybody gathered in Casa Loma as a female doctor walked in regarding Ezekiel's condition. Mister Ezekiel Miller has a grade three concussion. He has flesh wounds all all over his body. He fractured both arms and both legs in several places. His entire ribcage had been completely shattered into tiny little bits. He also fractured all 33 of his vertebrae. If he ever gets out of the hospital alive more than likely he won't be back before the fine print expires. Everyone was absolutely furious with Heather. She was already known as the villain of total drama but this time she took it too far. Ezekiel was on the verge of death because of her. But Heather shrugged it off like it was no big deal. Almost all of the students at Richmore academy agreed that even though he made some sexist comments it wasn't enough to have him badly injured. Ezekiel lay in a hospital bed plugged into a bunch of machines while thinking he was going through hell. |
Guest chapter 32 . 10/24/2019 Story idea: When challenge night started up again Chris announced that the next ten challenges would have ten different winners and the winners would compete in one final challenge at the end of the term before Christmas. If a contestant won a challenge before the tenth they can still compete and make it so that there won't be that much competition in the final challenge. The winner of that last challenge would be free from competing in challenge nights for the rest of the school year until year two began. Ezekiel then proceeded to unleash random acts of dominance by winning all ten of them and winning by a landslide. Heather ended up finishing second to him all ten times. She was infuriated that she lost to the sexist homeschool and a bunch of the students cheered for Ezekiel for being the hero to defeat the villain. |
Guest chapter 32 . 10/9/2019 Story idea: When challenge night started up again Chris announced that they were going on a little field trip to the towns one mile running track. All twenty two of them would run one lap around the track and the fastest time would win the challenge. Then next week they would return to the track and the times that they put down would determine where they would start in the five lap race where the winner would receive a one hundred dollar gift certificate that they could use on . They all got to the track and they started running laps. All but one of them had qualified with Ezekiel on the pole by one millisecond over Eva. Heather had managed to to qualify in third. Harold had put himself in the fourth position two seconds behind Heather. The only one that had yet to put down a lap was Gwen. She ran her lap and ultimately put herself in ninth. Ezekiel had received a copy of the entire first season of the Naruto anime on dvd for his prize. He then proceeded to tell everyone that it was just a fluke and he would not be the race winner. When it was time for the race next weekend Ezekiel had taken off his hoodie and hat to reduce drag. Everyone lined up ready to begin the five lap race for the amazon gift card. The race began and Ezekiel started pulling away with a huge lead. On lap four he began lapping everyone else like it was nothing until he was leading the race by a full lap. Ezekiel ultimately won the race but everyone was shocked when they found out he had put down a speed of forty miles per hour. Ezekiel had just broken the record for the fastest running speed ever set by a human being by a landslide. This would be a moment he would never forget. |
Guest chapter 32 . 8/4/2019 Story idea: During one of the challenge nights Eva makes an attempt at ruining Heather's chances at winning but instead ends up getting Ezekiel. Although it was an accident and nobody was supposed to get hurt Ezekiel ends up destroying his entire ribcage. When I say destroyed I mean all that's left of his 24 ribs are just tiny pieces of bone. He would have to be rushed to the hospital where he would get surgery and a lot of pain medicine to hopefully put him back together. He would have to wait over a year before finally being discharged. Eva then remembered when she used him as a punching bag and how frightened he must have felt. She also remembered that he got terrified easily and would always hide under his toque. She couldn't imagine the fear that he was going through being in that much pain on the edge of death. For once the fitness buff that had the ability to hurt a bunch of people nearly killed one that she had past history with without even trying. A bunch of the school students were actually thinking that she had badly hurt Ezekiel on purpose. Every night when Eva would go to bed she would start having tears in her eyes. She also kept having dreams where she accidentally killed Ezekiel and everyone was mourning over his funeral. During christmas break she would visit Ezekiel in the hospital lying in bed hooked up to a bunch of wires that were plugged into machines. Upon seeing this she burst into tears and finally apologized for all of the crap that she put him through. Ezekiel easily forgave her and the two officially became friends. When Ezekiel was finally released from the hospital and was back to normal Eva was the first to give him a hug. From that point onward Eva made a vow that she would never harm anybody ever again no matter how frustrated she got and would just take deep breaths. Ezekiel had helped her control her anger problems. |
Jason chapter 32 . 7/5/2019 Story idea: Everyone had come back from camp Wawanakwa and they were all asleep until they heard a scream. OOOOOWWWWW! Everyone ran over to Ezekiel and Duncan's room to see Ezekiel's face covered with blood and tears as Duncan was standing on the bed to avoid Brittany who was on the floor. NO BAD BRITTANY! yelled Courtney. WE DO NOT BITE. I'm sorry Ezekiel I don't know what got into her. Ezekiel was now throwing a tantrum in pain. Gwen tried to calm him down by patting him on the back of the head but to no avail. Bridgette ran in with a wet towel and began wiping Ezekiel's face clean. When the towel was removed the blood was gone and Ezekiel had open wounds on his face with yellow puss. Tyler threw up upon seeing this. That is going to leave a permanent scar said Eva. Same thing happened to my grandpa when he was five. Leshawna and Harold helped Ezekiel to the nurses office and while doing so Ezekiel continued to cry which woke up the whole school. Ezekiel stepped out of the nurses office with his face covered in bandages. The headmaster was there waiting for him and he was not pleased. Janet then ran up. Don't be mad at Ezekiel for waking the school, he's in a lot of pain right now said Janet. Ezekiel is not at fault said the headmaster. Courtney is the one held responsible being the owner of the raccoon. For injuring another student and waking the entire school she will be given a strike. Janet then hugged Ezekiel. I have been in love with you this whole time but was too scared to tell you said Janet. And I almost lost you to a raccoon. Everyone stood there in shock. Well you did defend me when you thought I was in trouble so- but before he could finish his sentence Janet kissed him on the lips. Rather than fight back Ezekiel returned it. When they broke away Janet asked you wanna be a couple? sure said Ezekiel. Justin and Dj were upset by this. The next morning everyone was talking about how Ezekiel was now dating the vice president of the student council. How was your kiss? teased Bridgette. It was wet said Ezekiel. Izzy then had a smile on her face. When do you two plan on getting to second base she asked. Ezekiel freaked out and pulled his toque down over his eyes. They haven't even been dating for a whole day yet said Harold. I don't think you should question Izzy said Noah. When challenge night started up again it was going to be a written test. The test would be on Harry Potter knowledge. The one with the highest score will win the reward while last place will be given a handicap for next week. At the end of the test Justin didn't get a single one right knowing nothing about Harry Potter. The winner was Ezekiel who got all of the answers right. Eva was a close second getting all but one answer right. Upon hearing this Janet jumped onto the stage blocking her boyfriend. Please don't hurt him, he was only participating in the challenge, hurt me instead said Janet. I'm not gonna hurt someone who's already injured said Eva. He's scared of you because he thinks you're going to use him as a punching bag again said Janet. Eva then got around Janet and put her hand on Ezekiel's shoulder. I'm sorry for using you as a punching bag said Eva. I lost control and I didn't know how much it scared you. She held out her and they shook. Ezekiel's prize for winning was all eight of the Harry Potter movies on dvd. And before Duncan got into the room Janet kissed Ezekiel good night. The next morning Ezekiel had his bandages removed leaving a scar on his face. Called it said Eva. Ezekiel, Do you love Janet? asked Bridgette. Of course said Ezekiel. Do you find yourself being with her for the rest of your life? asked Bridgette. Possibly said Ezekiel. You need to talk to her about how long this relationship is gonna go said Bridgette. Later on Ezekiel Bridgette walked in on Ezekiel and Janet signing some kind of contract. Bridgette looked at the contract and it stated that once the fine print expired they would get married. We thought that one week would be too early so we're waiting a while said Janet. When all of the other students found out Ezekiel was getting married to the vice president he became a lot more popular. The headmaster was shocked to find out for the first time in Richmore academy history two students were gonna get married after graduating. Knowing that they were going to get married Janet and Ezekiel called and asked their parents if Janet could spend christmas break at Ezekiel's house for the holidays. When they said yes they became overjoyed. Once you reach the point in the story where we reach christmas break you should write a spin off series called Ezekiel and Janet's christmas. You can also have Ezekiel and Janet sleep in the same bed with nothing to lose considering they are getting married. At some point I'm going to write my own fan fiction that will be a Naruto/total drama crossover so stay tuned. |
Guest chapter 32 . 6/12/2019 Story idea: When everyone gets back from camp Wawanakwa Chris tells everyone they are going on a field trip for the Friday night challenge. Everyone gets on the bus and they arrive at an indoor go-kart track. He tells the contestants that they will all take a kart and run one lap around the track. The fastest time would start first, second fastest will start second, so on and so forth. Everyone would be required to wear a helmet sock and helmet for safety. During the race if an accident happened the yellow flag would be waved telling everyone not to pass because they are under caution. If the accident is really bad the red would be displayed and everyone would have to stop. The green flag meant that racing would resume. The white flag meant the last lap of the race. The checkered would be the end. The race would consist of twenty laps. The first contestant to cross the finish line would win the reward while last place would be in a handicap next week. To make things interesting he also said intentional contact was allowed to increase drama. Qualifying resulted in Heather taking the pole putting Gwen in second and Ezekiel in third. Once Jessica waved the green flag everyone took off. Gwen was determined to not let Heather win. On the fifth lap she deliberately slammed into Heather sending her into a spin. Ezekiel was running in the outside lane at the time and Heather slammed into him hard. The impact caused Ezekiel's arm to slam the wall. The harness that was holding him broke and Ezekiel was launched off the track. The back of his helmet then hit the ground hard. Jessica immediately waved the red flag putting al karts to a halt. Everyone got out and took off their helmet's and socks, and ran over to Ezekiel. Bridgette carefully took off his helmet and sock revealing that his eyes were closed. Bridgette carefully picked up the back of his head and listened to his chest. He's alive said Bridgette. Oh God he's going to be mad at me for causing his accident when he wakes up said Gwen. That is if he doesn't have memory loss from the hit said Izzy. Soon an ambulance came and took Ezekiel to the hospital for treatment. When racing resumed Eva took the lead on the restart and went on to win the race and a five hundred dollar gift card to McDonalds. It was a bittersweet win as Ezekiel was probably on his death bed which worried everyone. When everyone went to bed that night Gwen was feeling guilty knowing that she hurt Ezekiel real bad. The next morning everyone was sitting in Casa Loma when a doctor walked in. Here is Ezekiel's condition said the doctor. He has a concussion and he fractured his left arm in several places. We just finished surgery on him and he should be back on Monday. On Monday when classes were over everyone was in Casa Loma where they saw Ezekiel walk in with his arm in a sling. Gwen walked over to him and put an arm on his shoulder. I'm sorry for hurting you back there said Gwen. I just didn't want Heather to win and I didn't notice you on the outside. Ezekiel smiled. It's okay Gwen, you didn't have hurting intentions said Ezekiel. But challenge nights are going to be rough now. Not so fast said a voice. They turned to see Chris. Due to having a concussion and a severely broken arm that was fractured in several places if I made you compete you would be dead said Chris. So I am making an exception to the fine print. Until you have fully recovered from your injury you don't have to compete in challenges no matter how long it takes. Chris walked away as Ezekiel breathed a sigh of relief. He then went to his room so he could get some sleep. End of review. P.S not to be a jerk trying to rush you or anything but it says in the description that year one is complete despite this story not being updated in over six years. I'm not asking you to hurry up with the story but I am asking you why is says the story is already done. |
Guest chapter 32 . 6/3/2019 Story idea: Ezekiel is walking on the sidewalk minding his own business when the unthinkable happened. A car blew it's left front tire causing it to swerve out of control and crash into him. Ezekiel is then knocked out and he hears a voice. You okay buddy? asked the voice. Ezekiel opened his eyes to see everyone who wasn't on camp wawanakwa except Heather right there. What happened? asked Ezekiel. You got hit by a car after it's tire blew out said Harold. I can't feel my left leg said Ezekiel. Gwen took off the blanket to reveal the bottom half of his left leg missing just below the joint. You lost your leg in the accident said Justin. Why don't I have prosthetics? asked Ezekiel. Chris was too cheap to pay for them said Leshawna. That's not the worst part said Noah. Due to Chris not making these episodes public your parents don't know about this said Courtney. He also said that due to the fine print competing in challenges is still mandatory said Trent. I can't compete, I only have one leg said Ezekiel. What an asshole. Ezekiel left the hospital walking on two crutches due to only having one leg. When everyone got back from camp wawanakwa they were horrified at what they saw. Bridgette being Ezekiel's best friend was especially in a panic. Everyone was confused because they thought Ezekiel would get a free pass due to losing an important body part he can't get back. The challenge nights were predictable as Ezekiel got three handicaps in a row with his disadvantage. After the third handicap Izzy walked by his bedroom before going to bed to see him clutching his teddy bear as tight as he could while his tears were rolling down his eyes. Izzy sat on the bed beside him and patted him on the head. Everything is going to be fine Zeke said Izzy. I just want to die a quick and painless death so I don't have to put up with this anymore said Ezekiel. He buried himself under the blanket as he continued to cry. Eva walked past and saw what was going on. First he makes us got to a crappy disgusting island twice and now he puts one of his own contestants in a position where they want to commit suicide said Eva. I am on the edge of doing something to get expelled so I can be rid of Chris. Eva, please kill me now said Ezekiel. Sorry bud, murder isn't legal in Canada said Eva. Ezekiel cried himself to sleep that night. In that same night Izzy measured Ezekiel's functioning leg and started carving into a log. After making the perfect shape she crept into Ezekiel's room and pushed the log up against the top half of Ezekiel's leg. She then used as much duct tape as possible to permanently attach the piece of wood. The next morning everyone was eating breakfast except Ezekiel who was still crying in bed. Bridgette just picked at her food knowing that her best friend was experiencing the worst moment of his life. After breakfast Izzy went into Ezekiel's room to see him buried in his pillow. Oh Zekey, I have a surprise for you said Izzy. Ezekiel pulled his face out from under the pillow to see Izzy. Is it that i'm going to die? asked Ezekiel. Even better said Izzy. She took off his blanket to reveal his makeshift leg. You made me a wooden leg said Ezekiel. Was up all night making it said Izzy. Ezekiel slowly stood up and started walking. A smile then appeared on his face. Oh my God it works said Ezekiel. He then grabbed Izzy and pulled her in for a hug. Thank you Izzy said Ezekiel. Don't mention it, and if Duncan ever kicks you out again for some alone time with Courtney you can bunk with me and Beth said Izzy. Ezekiel went red in the face and backed away. After he got dressed he walked into Casa Loma where everyone saw him walking on his wooden leg. You got a new leg said Bridgette. Izzy made it for me said Ezekiel. Um, that leg is a huge chunk of wood attached on with duct tape. It's going to get destroyed eventually said Heather. Then i'll just make him another one said Izzy. It's just going to break into pieces after he walks on it for a long time said Heather. Eva then grabbed Heather by the neck. He's just gone through three and a half weeks of wanting to commit suicide. Don't make him feel any bad again. Ezekiel looked down. No matter how many times I get new prosthetics I still only have one permanent leg said Ezekiel. He walked off depressed. Eva stared at down at Heather who was now sweating. Don't make me use one of my three strikes said Eva. She put Heather down and walked off to wrestling practice. I would have just used the strike said Cody. End of review. P.S extremexavier15 got his fan fiction a Canadian's redemption deleted. If you have any idea how this happened please leave an authors note. |
Guest chapter 32 . 5/27/2019 Considering the fact that Chris Maclean is totally insane you could put him in a position where he creates a challenge so dangerous that Harold is knocked out and sent the hospital. When he wakes up in bed he finds his arm in a sling while he lays in a hospital bed. Leshawna then tells him he had a concussion along with a broken arm and he was asleep for eight days after surgery. Eva then says it was a good thing she called 911 when the accident happened. As Harold thanks Eva for saving his life Ezekiel than says most most of his life. He pulls the blanket off the bed the reveal most of his left leg was a wooden peg just below the joint. Ezekiel says that He lost his leg on impact so he was up all night making him a new one. Ezekiel says if it gets destroyed he would be glad to make him a another one. Harold thanked Ezekiel for the new leg and after three days of adjusting he learns to walk on it. Eva and Ezekiel are then considered heroes by the school for calling after the accident and making a new leg. Considering how insane Chris is somebody would lose a leg in canon if it was real. And having a contestant lose something that can't be returned would be a nice shock to the readers. Don't even get me started on what deviant art would look like as people try do draw Harold's leg. |
Guest chapter 32 . 5/22/2019 Throughout this entire story there has never been a time where Ezekiel got angry. I think you should put him in a position where he gets angry at Eva and tells her that if she wants to use him as a punching bag again he's just going to call the police and sue her for assault and battery. Heck, you can make it the first time she she used him as a punching bag to be the cause of his anger. Or you can have Eva make an offensive comment about his parents. You don't have to use my ideas, just find a justifiable reason for Ezekiel to get really angry at someone. |
Guest chapter 32 . 3/20/2019 You should have Leshawna propose to Harold and for them to have arrangements to get married during summer break. |
Brain chapter 32 . 3/11/2019 Story idea: When everyone gets back from camp Wawanakwa Chris decides the first competition is going to test the contestants ability to see thing quickly. He then shows a floor made up of squares. A light pattern will appear on the floor and you have to re create the pattern by stepping on the square. If you get it right the square lights up. Get it wrong then you have to go back and try again. It starts off easy with a four by four. Then the floor expands to a five by five. After that is the most difficult, the six by six. A timer starts when you make your first step and ends when the contestant steps on an orange button. Complete all three paths with the greatest time and you can win three prizes. Complete the four by four and win a camera. Complete the five by five and win an electric guitar. If you complete the six by six you can win a keyboard. The camper with the fastest times combined will get to swap roommates with another contestant. And they are allowed to pick someone of the different gender. They are also allowed to choose two contestants who aren't themselves. Gwen realized she could not let cody win. Several minutes later twenty one of the contestants had made their run leaving Ezekiel remaining. Here were the current times. Harold had the fastest time on the four by four. Cody Had the rest of the times. Gwen started yelling GO GET EM EZEKIEL! Ezekiel walked up on to the stage cleared the four by four with the fastest time winning the camera. He messed up once on the five by five but cleared it the second time. Cody had just won the guitar. Ezekiel was currently sitting five seconds behind Cody. Gwen was praying Ezekiel would beat that time. Cody was hoping he would screw up so he could share a room with Gwen. Ezekiel was then shown the six by six. The second he stepped on the first square he was given a shock, literally. Ezekiel started randomly being choked with hundreds of electric volts. After that happened he fell forward landing on an incorrect tile and he was electrocuted again. The entire floor was flashing in many different colors. The floor broke underneath of Ezekiel sending him underneath the stage. The screen that showed the time shattered into a million pieces along with all of the lights burning out. I probably should have run some tests before I l put actual people on it. YOU DIDN'T TEST THIS AT ALL? YOU IDIOT! shouted Gwen. OH MY GOD YOU KILLED EZEKIEL! shouted Eva. I'm not dead said an injured Ezekiel. SOMEBODY CALLA GOD DAMN GROUP OF PILL PUSHERS BEFORE HE DIES! screamed Noah. What the hell is a pill pusher? asked Harold. A slang term for doctor said Eva. The headmaster dialed 911 and thirty seconds later and ambulance arrived. Two paramedics got out and put Ezekiel on a stretcher. Bridgette then ran up to them. As Ezekiel was loaded onto the ambulance Bridgette stepped on board. You are not going to go through this all on your own said Bridgette. The ambulance then took off at full speed. When they got to the hospital they carried Ezekiel out of the ambulance and started rolling him down the hallway. Ezekiel was then put in in a room where they lied him down on a bed. If you don't survive this I will murder Chris Mclean said Bridgette. A mask was then put on his face putting him to sleep so the surgery can begin. When Bridgette got back to Richmore Chris had an announcement to make. I have decided that Ezekiel and Cody are both the co winners and a tiebreaker race will happen on the school running track once Ezekiel is fully recovered said Chris. What happens if he dies in the hospital? asked Izzy. Then the fine print will end without having the full cast and all of you can go home said Chris. I think Ezekiel just did all of us a favor said Heather. Upon hearing this Eva gave Heather a black eye. Back at the emergency room Ezekiel was just waking up in a dark room. He could barely see a clock that said 3:00 AM. The lights turned on and Ezekiel looked down to see his arms and feet in casts. A girl with blonde hair walked into the room. Hello Ezekiel said the girl. Are you the nurse? asked Ezekiel. No, but I am your number one fan, the name is Dawn said the girl. I didn't know I had fans said Ezekiel. Well you are all over the total drama wiki after your fake date with Heather said Dawn. How did you my date was fake? asked Ezekiel. I was at the restaurant with my dad said Dawn. I'm a student at Richmore and I always had a major crush on you. Ezekiel then went red in the face. I always felt sorry for you because you were diagnosed with autism. How did you know about that? said Ezekiel. I can read you aura said Dawn. Don't worry i'm not a stalker, but I did find it extremely cute every time you covered you eyes with your hat when you were having an anxiety attack. I think i'm having one right now said Ezekiel. Sorry about that, People always think i'm a freak said Dawn. I think you're sane said Ezekiel. I just came by to tell you about what's going on right now said Dawn. The doctor said it was only your arms and feet. Chris said you don't have to compete in challenges until you're fully recovered. And I was thinking maybe you and me can have a proper dinner date once your out of here. I would be honored to said Ezekiel. Here's my number said Dawn as she handed him a piece of paper. She then gave him a smooch on the nose. She then said goodbye and left the room. Ezekiel went back to sleep knowing he possibly had himself a girlfriend. Bridgette then came into his room and she had witnessed everything with him and Dawn. She knew signing up for this show was a good idea for him. End of review. I saw a picture of Dawn in a Richmore academy uniform on deviant art and I knew this would be the perfect girlfriend for Ezekiel. I am also positive that Ezekiel does have autism considering the way he acts. I looked at some of your previous reviews containing story ideas and a lot of them were Nascar fans making mentions to Richard Petty and Kyle Busch. I didn't know the sport was that popular. And most of your past reviews involve Ezekiel. I don't want him to go feral like he did in canon so please don't make that happen. And seeing how you are asking for decorations maybe you can include a stuffed Pikachu. |
Guest chapter 32 . 3/4/2019 Please don't make Ezekiel go feral like he did in cannon. |