Why wouldn't the Alvaranan(?) visitors know what an elevator is? I mean, at least Kyle, Aaron, and Aria should know — there's an elevator in the barn...

Great job realistically portraying childbirth, I'm impressed! Usually authors make it out to be five minutes of pain and screaming and then poof! Baby! But it looks like you've done your research — good on ya.

Literally read this story in 2011 and i was trying to find it again in 2016. 5 years later! Read it again and loved it! I don't think i wrote a review before, but i just wanted t say that i 100% love this story so much! The writing was great, the tone, the epilogue everything! So thank you! It was a really great read! :D :D :D :D

This was prefect :D There is just so much about it :3

But namely Aria getting EVERYTHING right on how dirty Aaron and Leann got XD That's just golden (My OTP for RF2 children, btw :) )

Now you have me wanting to get back into writing and get out all of my Rune Factory stories

And did you hear about the fact Leonel has a little sister?

LOVED THIS STORY SOO MUCH

in fact a bit too much, all i did was read it-which took ages but it was amazing

i really loved the way everything ended

i give it 100 out of 10

-black mizt

xxx

XD like what Aria said I thought Dorothy is a quiet little church girl. Lol, the newspaper turning into a weapon.

Kel: Bad Leonel! *smacks him across the face*

Leonel: Ow, didn't Aria and mom gave me enough punishments already?

Kel: I don't care what they did to punish you! I'm. Your. Fangirl!

Lawl...

bahahahaha! Wow, a bit of an extreme look on the whole crazy-pregnancy-hormones-never-ending-hunger thing... but that was REALLY entertaining! Poor Barret xD

And so I proceed to be endlessly amused by the thought of Dorothy insulting Barrett out of pregnancy frustrations and Kyle and Barrett's brogreeting.

Aww, Aria cuddling Leonel

D'aww. Leonel makes me think of a cowardly lion who gathers his true courage when his friends (especially loved ones) are threatened What a sweetheart, showing his manly side in front of the girl he loves.

I learned something from this story, ask before you drink. Is the lesson I get. Anyway, nice story

This is a awesome story! I think that there shouldbe a sequel to this! like Sechs? or Orland and Serena having revenge? or... i dunno out of ideas wait maybe Aqua something ( the name of the dragon in RF 3 ) comes and kidnapps Tristan or Arianna or somebody ( i know! the 3rd child! ) and the third child is the main character in rune factory 3 O.o anyways good story thats all i'm trying to say can't wait for rune factory oceans

this is one of the best stories i have ever read! U R SO AWESOME!

I LOVE how Leonel punched Orland and said "That's for knocking up the girl I've had a crush on since I was five!"

I love this story! I managed to lose track of it many monthes ago, and I was so sad that I couldn't find it. Finally, I went looking for it, and I found it. 3 Great job. I really love that you made Leonel straight, because I always thought he was the best choice of them all. And, may I say, you're sequel, and this, deserve much credit. I am surprised you kept my interest. No, I'm not trying to be snotty. I just have a very short attention spand, and this caught my attention, and lured me into reading the entire series in a day. Well, not ONE day. I do need my eyes, after all. I love your other works, and I do look forward to seeing more from you!

Amazing story. Usually when I read dramatic stories it seems a little forced, but this was just great. It just flowed so well. And since I can't tell you about all my favorite parts, I'm going to tell you my least favorite part. Not in terms of, "wow, this really sucked and it shouldn't be in the story" but in terms of like, what made me really emotional. And that was when orland and Roy decided to go to Aria's delivery. (Rant mode time) Orland is such a total, complete jerk! he decides he's just going to go to the girl he knocked up's delivery of HIS CHILDREN so he can learn more about being a doctor? Leonel totally got major points with me for punching that stupid idiot. And Roy decides to TAG ALONG with the guy who got his ex-girlfriend pregnant to his EX-GIRLFRIEND'S delivery when he broke up with her because he couldn't be there for her because he's a terrible person and he never truly cared about her! And with the scene with Cammie in the church I was like "You're helping Roy with HIS problems? Aria has had to carry her problems in her BELLY. Roy doesn't have any problems except that he needs to grow a pair and stop being a self-absorbed butthead."

Ah, I feel tons better. Great story, you rock, I worship at your feet, and I read your sequel already and I loved that as well. I'll be reviewing that after this one. Keep up the good work!