i love this one

Every time i see this tittle i canr help but laugh, whenever i read it the voice in my head screams it out. LmFao

i hope there will be sequel

This really bugged me but
If he can get pregnat and Hitachi used naruto cum as lube couldn't naruto get himself pregnate.
Ps love this fanfic

This story is just wrong.
Why were the kids alowed to be adopted when then are only in care for a week.
Does Itachi know they are narutos kids.
Why isnt naruto

Ok half way through second chaper and fiding it to rediculuce ridiculous

love it .. just hope that the stroy not so fast . anyway 9/10!

Puedes hacer una secuela me encanto el fic

My gosh this was fabulous. 11/10

I just loved, though I would have like it if Itatchi didn't find out so soon that the kids were his.

Amazing! Thats it lol.

Good plot, but I wish u let it flow better.
A lot was written well and with good intention, but
I feel that others were lacking.
Like the reactions and scene changes,
They make sense, but could have been better.
All in all,
Loved it anyway:)

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Beautiful story! What really struck me the most was the last part:

"You don't choose when, how and why you fall in love nor who you fall in love with. It's your choice to follow through; to make that love work. To make choices which are best for you. After all, life is what you make it."

It just makes me feel good and happy inside :)
Thank you for your wonderful story!

one of the best stories I've read...