wow i did not see that coming

I bet OP and Megsy are SOOOO proud of there son. he's the nicest mech in the world. XD

Woah! Ironhide! Jfc man. That was so funny and megatron dragging optimus to the dorm. Holy shit. I can't breathe. Thankyou for this.

Ahhh please make another part or a story about how he's adjusting to this and all that 3 would be great to see how Starscream handles the autobots and what about his trine?!

That was awesome!

Wish this one was continued.

Can you get any ideas for chapter two? Because I want to know what happens. Please?

It's almost midnight, and I was silently laughing so much that I hit my funny bone, hard. It is stinging with heat and it freaking hurts like there is fresh fire to them for a few moments, though I guess this is better than starscreams scituaion. XD

I want more XD

Oh my gods this is awesome! I love this concept! I'm never gonna be able to look at Lokzul the same way again! I wanna pinch his cheeks... X3

I lost track of how many times I read this... at least 4 times... I think. :P

Brilliant, hilarious, amazing! Everything from Rumble's remark, Soundwave's perfectly placed (and oddly appropriate, considering) sarcasm, the Twilight Zone joke (dunno why I found that one so funny *Snickers*), the lovebirds's arguing over Screamer's CPU while he's standing in front of them, Prime's grand finale, and - talk about ending with a bang! - Ironhide's comment.

Fan-slagging-tastic! XDDD

I can't remember just what my reaction was originally, but I know it had to have been good if I've read it so many times! ...Not to mention it must have hurt laughing so much...
This is honestly one of the few fics I find myself reading... and rereading... and rerereading! Definitely a memorable and a worthwhile fic that all Scream fans (and plenty of others too ;)) should read!

Another thing... Honestly, I'm glad to know I'm not the only one who was curious over Starscream's un-Decepticon-like color scheme. Haha, but this? Poor Starscream! ...And Bumblebee! Hahaha, is Bucket-head looking to have another sparkling already?! XDDD

I apologize though, as this is hardly my best review, scattered and likely messy as it is, but I felt it was about time I wrote SOMETHING for this. :) Speaking of writing something, I would be thrilled if you continued this, but knowing the likelihood of that - which is nil - I have something else to ask of you... Would it be okay if I maybe wrote a story based on this, or more accurately, what happens afterwards? The possibilities are endless!

Now, this leaves me with one final question... what does that make Skyfire? o.O

Great now he is going to be TUCK IN AT NIGHT BY his worst enemy!
Also whose the carirer and whose the sire?

Oh my god xD this was fun to read xD
Poor Starscream xD

Oh, oh my god... Too... too funny. Pure genius. Bravo, dude, bra-fucking-vo! I can't- I can't even... HA! Ohhhhh I wish there was more, I really do. Ahaha! If you ever get the bunny to do a separate short story, or even continue this, that would just be too good. XDXDXDXDXD

Anywho! I apologize for the choppy, non-coherent comment. I was just laughing too hard. XD Awesome job.

omg can you make another chapter please i'm laughing so hard at this omg half the war over who gets to top X3