Please write more...

Cont'd They talk and end up kissing. This is when their family finds them.

If it does, it's because this story has already been written. In the real world, this is called plagiarism. Imagine my surprise to find this while looking for the orignal story.

See if this reminds you of anything.

Derek and Casey are on vacation. Nora makes them stay together at a carnival. After eating, Casey sees this little machine Fortune Teller. She convinces Derek to try it. It speaks of a future for them. They blow it off but they start to feel bad so they both go back to the bed to sleep it off. They wake up in bed together 10 years in the future. Casey's hair is shorter and Derek's face is more filled out. Two kids run in the room. Turns out that Casey and Derek are married with two kids. They work together and try to figure out how to get back to their time. They end up falling in love. They talk to the family about how they got together. Lizzie says that they're unsure because on that very vacation they found them kissing and that was that. Eventually, they get sent back. They talk.

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Oh I LOVE that they are meeting each other and we get to see more of what that future held for them.

Will there be anymore? You can't have it stop when they finally met up with each other!

Casey like this is more like on of Derek's 'high school bimbos' but I guess she hasn't realized that she herself had changed back.

PLEASE Update this in the future! I wanna see the other life path too and figure out what exactly that fortune teller did.

Are Derek and Casey in the same future path?

Like if Casey's future with Max...if she hasn't talked to Derek does that mean Derek's future with Kendra he hasn't talked to Casey either?

"Damn! If I where a girl I would so date me!" Derek cracks me up with that.

Derek seems to like his future more than Casey.

I'm wondering what the fortune teller would have seen if she looked into Derek's future.

I get a feeling that she might actually have 3 paths if you have Sam, Max and Derek being options, right?

Hey! Will you be updating your story at all. I liked it when you started it and hope you plan on finishing it. Please update soon.

loved it hope u update soon!

I love the story so far. Update soon please.

Haha. Diss! Go Casey! xD

Great chapter; update soon!

God bless!

Rose

It's probably, not probely. Again, just pointing it out. It seems a little bit rushed, but don't get your hopes crushed. It still sounds really good.

It sounds like a wonderful story but one thing:

Every time a new character speaks, you start a new paragraph. Just wanted to point that out. It sounds great so far!

loved it update soon

Omgz, I love it.

Although you already know because I told you on MSN. haha :)

Anyways. I'm definitely going to make this trailer, because you have asked me to. We'll talk more about it lata. haha.

GOOD JOB CASE!

-Em. :) haha

Love it. I was so happy whenI woke up and seen this alert in my emails but then I had to go to school and had to wait til I got home.

-Victoria