Gah! This chapter made me cry. I can literally feel the pain coming from Snape her. Great writing.

I first started reading this some ten years ago when you only had like three or four chapters, and then forgot about it. I re-discovered it today as a completed fic, and I love it. Thank you (many years late!) for finishing this! I remember wanting to know what happened next, and I'm so glad to finally know :)

bravo molto bravo mi e piaciuta

Sequel please

Gah, I loved this.

I found this fic addicting, it was amazingly written and a very interesting storyline. Thank you :)

This was wonderful! I would have really like to follow them a bit longer at the end, but I enjoyed it immensely! Such a fun and new ideaThank you for writing!

That was a gorgeously written monologue, well done! In character and realistic yet raw and emotional.

This was a fresh read for me and I loved it. The ending feels so happy and hopeful and like a new beginning for them with so much more that could happen.

Loved your story! Thanks so much for sharing!

The most idiotic so called fight seen I have ever had the misfortune to read.
Overall this story is beyond dumb; I kept reading it to see just how bad it could get.

Wow! Loved your story.

Golden goals gleaming.. loveThis is the most intriguing read I’ve had in a long time. I love the shifting pace of with which you’ve woven this story, so very appropriate. You are so concise and unflinching in your writing.. there must have been some grisly research that went into writing some of the scenes.. I was especially taken aback by m the stabbing and the breath causing the dagger to pierce through again. Horrifying! But not horrible purely for the sake of it.. You’ve left enough enigma that I’m going to need a few more chapters to be wholly satisfied, but I think that’s rather the point. Bravo

Argh that was so dramatic!

This was absolutely lovely

“Halloween arrived at Hogwarts with its usual back-stabbing abruptness”. HA! It’s so true!