kirin's cousin should be reborn into a shiny dratini

I LOVE this story please write more because im running low on good reading because ive read all my favorite fanfics so far and people never seem to update *remembers story that was last up dated in 2002* so just remember you have 1 new FAN. *favorites & follows everything*

Cool Story. Interesting plot and characters. good chapters with just enough suspence and action to keep me interested. Keep up the awsome work and update again soon. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Cool story, can't wait for the next chapter.

That was great. I'm guessing this isn't going to be continued?...That's a shame.

MOAR!

The story is great i hope the next chapter will be just as good.

cool

This is a great story. I really like Riolu's name and I love Amber.

This sounds like a different version of A Little Night Music

She really should stop slipping up, like that... Having little bits of trivia that you should have had know way of knowing makes for awkward situation.

Cool. I like how this story's going so far. Adding it to Story Alerts now.

So Joshua might know who Kirin really is and we meet a reborn Pikachu. Sweet.

I'm gonna make a wild guess here and say that the Pikachu is Taylor's sister.

Update soon, please!

Agreed. Yay!

Yay! You updated! :D I really like where this story is going. It can sometimes be depressing, but the plot is very interesting. Keep up the great work!

Great story! I like the suspence and hate it at the same time! I look forward to you next update.

-Michael