I found your stories very well written. Too much of fanfiction in the Harmony universe consists of jealous Ron, unbelievable characters and does not really express the deep relationship Harry and Hermione have for each other without it becoming a smut fest or bashing galore. You, on the other hand write well taking from the books that which is relevant. Hope to read more of your stories soon

Loved it! it was good as is, but part of me REALLY wanted it fleshed out, instead of highlighted segments. Ah well...

Hahaha I loved this story, surely fixes the horrible mess that became the later books. Now, here’s a challenge for you: somebody puts a curse on one of Harry’s children which can only be lifted when they attend Hogwarts for 7 years.. can they reform magical society in the process? Who did it, and why? Is Ron still a git? An opportunity for a sequel XD

Great story; just the way it should have been. I still strongly believe that the end of the fourth book and the entire fifth, sixth and seventh books were written by someone else.

Very good although the longer it went on the more annoyed i got, seriously why didn't they just leave sjeesh! But having them coming together was worth it.
The end i had to laugh why would they leave there little paradise, and Neville explaining just why they wouldn't want to go back just that haha.

So much better than the books! Omg the books left me feeling nauseous, this cured me. I still think they are atrocious after GOF, but honestly it’s just a degree of bad that keeps increasing in order of magnitude, I hated OOTP but now I think it’s ok when compared to HBP which I hated with a passion until I read the hollow shit which I despised with a passion until I read that epilogue bullshit, and Harry’s parents urging him to go kill himself, wtf.

But anyway, I digress, so many things I hated, and yet this little story suddenly made all the shit palatable, and allowed me to focus on the bits of books that were fun and enjoyable.

Thank you so much.

Why do people pair Luna and Neville all the time? They have very little connection. You know what, your mother was a grade-A CUNT!

Much better ending than JKRs epilogue.

This is the ending that makes sense.

This was lovely. Thanks for sharing it with us.

You did a tremendous job. This is a fantastic short story. Everyone should read this. Anyone bullied or even if you are not. It makes excellent sense.

Totally brilliant. I kept hoping at each moment they would cast it all in and go with the plan, but the stuck to the mission right til the end. But what an ending it was. Loved their lives and family.

Love it

Loved it!

Much more satisfying than the books.