Reviews for On Thin Ice
OrangeSunset1701 chapter 12 . 12/10/2014
This was a brilliant sequel! The ending was perfect. You made sure that your readers wouldn't be able to predict what was going to happen next, and the humor and tension were just right. Good on ya, mate!
SaraiEsq chapter 12 . 9/17/2014
Not bad, not bad at all.
RailGirl1 chapter 12 . 7/3/2012
I loved this story. Newkirk is the greatest and I really liked Wagner. Great job. Have could you write some more stories? You're a great author
Sgt. Moffitt chapter 12 . 7/20/2011
What a terrific adventure! There were enough thrills, chills, and humorous mishaps to account for several episodes.

I absolutely LOVE Wagner; he's the best OC ever! His tentative relationship with Ingrid, his friendship with Newkirk and loyalty to all of Hogan's team, and the way he manages to save the situation in the nick of time (more than once!) make him an appealing figure who would have been a great asset to the show.

And of course the way the tables got turned on the hapless Schmidt at the end was priceless.
Amaizin Blue chapter 12 . 4/27/2009
Very good ending, I thought it kept very well with the mood of the original show, very well written, and I enjoyed it very much, can't wait to get going on your next story ;-)
ML Miller Breedlove chapter 12 . 4/26/2009
This story could have played as an original episode. I thorougly enjoyed it.
ColHogan chapter 12 . 4/25/2009
Sorry to see this story end. It was great. I loved how Wagner was able to slip that letter Carter had written out of Schmidt's pocket. Things worked out for Hogan and Newkirk better than originally planned. Good job!
snooky-9093 chapter 12 . 4/25/2009
LOL. Wagner brings bad luck? Quick thinking on everyone's part. Great job on the closure.
Prowler4 chapter 12 . 4/24/2009
But they called Wagner in! It's their fault they had contact at all!

Loved the story. I was kinda worried about the whole framing Hochstetter thing. And Wagner came through! Yea!

Keep writing!
Deana chapter 12 . 4/24/2009
THE END? OH NO! LOL ;)

This was an awesome story! I'm sad to see it end! Great job!

Now go post to your other story! LOLOL ;)
General Kinchmeyer chapter 11 . 4/20/2009
Hey! the tension is really building now. It's getting really really good. keep on writing. But, if Wagner got Hogan and Newkirk back to camp, wouldn't they have a visible mark of struggle?
Prowler4 chapter 11 . 4/19/2009
Can anyone say "Crud"?
Amaizin Blue chapter 11 . 4/19/2009
Very entertaining chapter, good pace and kept my interest, very good job, I enjoyed it, can't wait for the next chapter!
Soon to be world renown Gracie chapter 11 . 4/18/2009
This is definitely a "dun dun dun" moment, isn't it? Update soon, I love this story! ... (And your other one, too. :D)
Jennaya chapter 11 . 4/18/2009
So many things went wrong in this chapter, I hope Newkirk doesn't get caught with the letter!

Thought it was interesting that Hogan had no qualms about hitting Wagner. Maybe he pretending to hit Hochstetter in his mind. LOL
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