So... I løve it, don't get me wrong, but, Blaise is gay? Ew and Aw...

aw this is adorable! They're both so...cute! In a masculine way of course ) hahah

I was wondering if you wanted a beta? I'm not asking because I think its bad (it's not), but because there were some grammatical errors and stuff, and I have never been a beta before. I'm a pretty bad salesperson, so I probably did a bad job of trying to get a beta'ble story.

But anyways, I can't wait to find out what happens next. I'm so happy you chose Blaise, a very versatile character, because so few people take him to write about. Good luck with the rest of the story!

-Lorna

This is an interesting story, but perhaps you could make the chapters longer?

and also, in this one you left the italics on, but i wasn't sure if you meant to or not.

-Lorna

This is really good so far, please update!