Fucking amazing work man, I never really like one shots, we'll 3 shot I guess in this case, but holy shit this was an amazing read.

was there a point? and also forgiving after something like that? wow...don't drink and write

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Well done amazing story! Brilliant ending.

This was beautifull yet painfull.
I applaud your writing and skill.
And just a touch of despair.
Well done.

Pure garbage.

Making new hallows? Garbage

Interesting premise well executed if a bit rushed.

I think that Hermione got of very lightly though. Harry faced the Hallows for longer and possessed more of them - why is it that he can resist whilst she cannot? Has she some character flaw that makes her more susceptible to this? Strange how it is Harry that pays a heavier price than she for her failures.

A very Lovecraft story, delightfully creepy. I found chills just reading it

Whaaaaaat!

This is just epic. I have no other words for this. Well, I could, but they wouldn't do it justice.

This is quite unique, as far as I've read, and the prose is excellent. I am thoroughly captivated by this.

Have mercy. That was not at all what I was expecting.. bravo! This was excellent!

This is a beautiful story told very well in such a short length. It's surprising how effective so few words can be. But that's the art of the short story. Personally, I would have liked more, because it was a good experience. Tragic but moving. Poor Harry. It seemed a bit off that Harry could accept the role and then give it back moments later. It leaves it unclear as to whether he is still Master of Death or just dead and passed on. I assume it means he accepted the awesome power to do what was necessary to save the world from Hermione, but had no desire to keep that power. His reward being Ginny and Lily. It was very sad, but lovely. Kudos.

An interesting read. Satisfying character development. Thanks for writing.

Holy mother of awesomeness