I was starting to love the story until you decided to make it so that Jasper's Gift worked on her and her's didn't. Honestly she has a right to be pissed off and to get her revenge on the family. Basically you making it seem like she's jasper's bitch and I hate stories like this that makes Bella immediately have no choice but to roll over and accept everything.

Wonderful! I absolutely loved this story!

So will she became a whiny little bitch when they show up tomorrow?don't know if I can read the story if she gets all whiny and forgives. the squirrel munchers then takes up their she really believe that Rose could have really saved her? Demetri would have destroyed her.

So will she became a whiny little bitch when they show up tomorrow?don't know if I can read the story if she gets all whiny and forgives. the squirrel munchers then takes up their diet.

That was she doesn't care too much that he is there.

I guess now that Bella has shown up Jasper will get over his pity party also?

She needs to get past her pity party and realize she is Strong enough to take them down. She could have taken out Jane that day if she hadn't been so busy feeling so sorry for her self.
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She needs to grow up and stop whining about that little bitch that dumped her. he is probably with his boyfriend now anyway.

I really like this story

Great story. Ending seemed rushed

Bravo!

I LOVE IT!

They will wipe out the wildlife population then the humans will starve and then the Volturi will kill all of them to save their food source.

How many pieces will he be in soon?

''He's not very ...accepting ,well big friggin' what he did screw they need him for the fight? what i don't understand is if they have been there for weeks why didn't they call for reinforcements? Jasper could have called Peter and Char or Peter's knower should have seen this.