Reviews for For the Lack of Paperwork |
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rini anointed436 chapter 1 . 6/8/2010 This is a great read for a crack fic. With Mustang (sometimes unintentionally) drawing away the girls' attention from Havoc and toward himself, Havoc is out of luck in charming women. LOL. That is so OC (out of character) for Riza to be talking so openly regarding the female anatomy. Then bringing Ed into the picture... He'll definitely look forward to getting a chance to be able to push the colonel's buttons. |
starfmalover chapter 1 . 9/28/2009 OMG THIS IS FREAKIN HILARIOUS! I love the two lines "You want me to make him a doll or something?" and "This'll piss off Mustang won't it? I am so in." I love this story it is so funny and it doesn't need to make sense, most of the funniest don't. Great job. |
a chapter 1 . 3/26/2009 OMG! This is so funny! It's brilliant! You definitely should write another chapter. I want to see how Havoc and Mustang will react. Should be interesting to say the least. Thanks so much for sharing this so far. Please WRITE MORE! |
Red Roses2 chapter 1 . 3/21/2009 Hm, wonder what Ed meant by "piss off the Colonel." Hee hee. This was funny. I love it when Mustang's subordinates have to work together for ridiculous reasons. :) It's hilarious! |
Chang Wumei chapter 1 . 2/27/2009 One request, sequel please? 8) I really like to read how Edward piss Mustang off XD |
Sonar chapter 1 . 2/27/2009 That was pretty good. At least you didn't have the guys and Ed plot against Roy where Ed dresses like a girl and pretends to like Havoc. I could picture Havoc being so confused and dejected if he found out that Ed dressed up like a girl. Then again, Havoc might of laughed to see Roy looking disturbed to find out that he hit on Ed. |