Is that it? I feel so unfulfilled. Well if that was all then, it was well written and I did enjoy it. I see this hasn't been updated for some time. Nothing like dredging up the past hah! Anyway I always did like the AU world. Here hoping you write some more of this or something new and completely different. :P Atchika

hey love this chapter hope you cann write more please.

Oops, so sorry. I guess I posted my review twice! Don't I feel stupid... _

Don't take it personally, k? My review, I mean. I really did think your story was good. I was a little meaner than I normally am,,, I haven't had my lunch yet _~

Lady C.

Hmmm,,, This was pretty good. Really, I liked it. Your plot is interesting, and your details are very good. But...

I don't know. I just didn't get it. Your writing style is unusual, and I can't seem to become interested in your story even though it has an exceptional plot. I think this is what the others who read your story feel, considering your lack of reviews. (Don't worry, though, I didn't get reviews in the beginning either! _~)

Maybe you need a beta-reader. You know, one of those people that read and edit your stories before you post them? Perhaps you could even have someone co-write your story with you, like one of you could write a chapter and the other could write the next one? I would be happy to offer my services, if you choose to accept. If you don't particularly want ME to be your beta-er, than there are plenty of others who would be delighted to oblige... _

Please notify me when you update, and if you are able to get a beta-er!

Fanfictionally Yours,

Lady C.

Hmmm,,, This was pretty good. Really, I liked it. Your plot is interesting, and your details are very good. But...

I don't know. I just didn't get it. Your writing style is unusual, and I can't seem to become interested in your story even though it has an exceptional plot. I think this is what the others who read your story feel, considering your lack of reviews. (Don't worry, though, I didn't get reviews in the beginning either! _~)

Maybe you need a beta-reader. You know, one of those people that read and edit your stories before you post them? Perhaps you could even have someone co-write your story with you, like one of you could write a chapter and the other could write the next one? I would be happy to offer my services, if you choose to accept. If you don't particularly want ME to be your beta-er, than there are plenty of others who would be delighted to oblige... _

Please notify me when you update, and if you are able to get a beta-er!

Fanfictionally Yours,

Lady C.

Really good plot, I'm amazed! The descriptions of the settings and the people made me feel that I was really there. Hope you continue and nice job!

:)

I love the diction and the voice in this story, and the idea is great! Being a musician, the musical aspect is really apealing.

Are you going to do a story similar to Pygmalion?

I can't wait untill you post the next chapter!

~PsychoticDitz

This is an amazing story and i want to find out what happens!

This is a really good story, and i can't wait to find out what happens!

I think that this story is great, you need to keep it up!

Hey, hey! Like the new story...I didn't see it before...the other one, either...reading that one next _~

And then I'll read the latest of "Truth" _

This is good, compelling, i can't wait to read more!

And the archives are going to be ready soon-finally, ne?

Keep it up!

~Bonnie-Chan

::clapping:: I want more please!

I am glad you posted it, it's perfect! :-)

An interesting idea. Would you mind if I MSTed it? If you'd rather I didn't, email me at . If I don't hear from you, I'll assume it's ok.