this is cruel but beautiful.

Update more chapters about this story,because it's the best,extra and the great story that I was reading about it,and I am also starting to love and to like reading to this story. So can you please write more chapters,because I want to know what happens in the next chapters about it. THANKS SO MUCH FOR WRITTEN TO THIS STORY,thanks so much about it.&&&£££%%%$$$

What a superb story!

Wow. That was a powerful story. I love how determined and desperate Henry is to make sure that Elizabeth succeeds him to the throne, and how much he is looking forward to her reign beginning though that naturally means his death. It's incredible.

I can't imagine what happens to England know that Elizabeth has a straight path to ruling, and the possibility of her marriage to someone considering she didn't watch her father go through women like paper. The changes to history Henry may have created due to his vision are astounding to consider, and yet I can't help but wonder if that made it better.

Interesting.

Henry, what have you done?

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Ok u totally shocked me and made me love it

Wow, just...wow.

You wrote a story like this, about Henry fighting for Elizabeth, instead of leaving her to suffer. You wrote it so well. Though poor Mary. I'm glad for More though, but the disgrace he would feel. X(

This was good, very good, a fun thing to read.
Though I'm not sure, his vision would come true. It was what Elizabeth suffered through that turned her into the Virgin Queen. Though I hope she does anyway, but wow, things would be so different. *jaw-drop*

Thank you, for writing~

Wow. Just wow.

you should make a second story of mary she dies and she has to decide to become a angle or demon she choose to become a demon then finds out what her father did then sets out to destroy Elizabeth and anne

Something magnificent... I love that it is long and not a short story. I am also glad that you let Anne live.

Great story! Loved it!

Good story. :)

BEST STORY EVER!