This is so good! You are so talented! Great job!

You should feel like a real author because this feels like a real story! I cannot explain how but you always surprise me with what you write and how much you write and its the best I've seen! Please don't stop and keep getting new ideas I love them.

Whewww. I thought that was the last chapter. :)) i really wanna read the next part although i can't seem to see it in your profile. :( I'm dying to know what will happen to them next. Keep up the great work. ;)

WOOOAHH! I soooo did not see that one coming. How the helll asdgfghjkl ughhh. This is really good and i can't stop reading it. Asdfghjkl

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Great story

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ommmmg

Is Gabriella a virgin ins this story or not I just want to know because I just think that she should lose her virginity to Troy.

Ok you are loosing my attention... I feel like you are turning around not really going anywhere, so I'll run through the chapters k?

They are so falling in love haha

Just on thing, if you need to put A/N in the middle of the story, the you're not doing a good job describing it. You readers should be able to see in their minds what you're talking about without you having to give physical images.

It was cool, just be careful not to repeat some words to many times. You can use the thesaurus when it comes to worse. It was a little too childish for me and sometimes Troy was out of character specially when he started singing and dancing to... Britney Spears? Really? What guys do that? lol

But I liked the ending.

This chapter was well written. I read it form beginning to end which is a good thing. Not all authors can keep my attention for so long. lol

Maybe I would have liked a little more details on his life back in LA, but it's good. Specially the fact that we get a glimpse of Troy's anger. Good job!

wow..she is angel...