Hope you suffer and die for your perverted and sick fetishes. This crap you wrote is not entertainment. It’s is nothing but a way for disgusting individuals to get their jollies. There was absolutely nothing good about this story and it had nothing of redeeming value. It contained nothing but perversion, darkness, despair, hopelessness, death and destruction. And you the writer glorified in it. You disgust me you pathetic sack of shit. Burn in hell.

Good story. I’ll miss it

Gosh, this is a very gruesome story.

This story turned out to be a disappointment, so I am looking forward to new stories from you.

Please pick this up again it's very good.

I love how Harry is too stupid and arrogant now to realize he started the war with the goblins and the centaurs are using him for their own ends.

But glad Luna is alive.

Well maybe Harry shouldn't have pissed the Goblins off. Now he's got the blood of innocents on his hands.

Well, I knew you had not finished the story or updated it in eight years, so I have only myself to blame. I'm sorry you have abandoned your story, as I find it interesting. Perhaps one day you will return and finish it.

Poor Harry lost an eye, Luna, and his wand. This is not good.

"In the Hogwarts Hospital Wing, a girl with bright blond hair tossed and turned in her sleep, dreaming of a boy with black hair and emerald eyes." Was Firenze lying? Is Luna still alive, or is this some other blonde?

Ron and Hermione are still alive ... wherever they are, correct? I'm assuming they are somewhere in the Chamber of Secrets. Will Harry go back for them, or will he leave them to die ... or go insane?

I wonder how much Dobby knows. Would he stay with such a Dark Harry? Or does he feel that Harry's actions have been warranted thus far? Thinking about it, Hermione, Ron, and Ginny have been doing pretty Dark things themselves, and most of Harry's actions against them have been responses to their deeds. I guess Ginny's actions are over at this point.

It will be interesting to see what the Centaurs want to teach Harry. I'm surprised Bane seems to have changed toward Harry ... rather like Snape. How long will it take for the various factions in Harry's life to realize he has not died, especially if they find his wand?

Oh, goody! Luna has been healed. I was wrong, though. I thought Ron had injured her. I don't want to think about what Harry will do when he learns the true culprit ... although I have an ugly hunch. Would he call the life debt due for her actions?

"Down in the pandemonium, a red haired student caught sight of its prey. This chaos offered the perfect chance to advance the plan. A wicked smile grew stretched across the face of the predator." Why do I feel like this is Ron, and he's going to do something bad?

Oh, boo. I love Luna. I'm curious. Was Luna killed by a DE ... or by Ron? If it was Ron, I'd have to say he was a Dead Man Walking.

If I were Harry, I'd try to stay conscious and away from places where the Dastardly Duo (Ron and Hermione) can get to him. I hope he has his Cloak and Map once again. If not, he'd better have Dobby retrieve them. Immediately.

Not that I don't think Hermione and Ron deserve what they're getting - they do - but I worry about what wreaking vengeance is doing to Harry. I think it does something to one's psyche to get caught up in getting revenge.

Harry knows he will never truly receive justice from the Wizarding world as it is set up at this time. The Wizengamot is filled with active DEs and closet Voldy sympathizers, and the Minister's hands are far too deep in DE pockets. Harry is trying to get some form of Justice the only way he knows to do it. I just hope it doesn't backfire on him.

I'm curious about this power of touch. Harry thinks it is "the Power He knows not"; but how can it be? If it is in his blood, won't Voldy have it, as well? After all, he used Harry's blood to resurrect himself.

Now ... do Ron and Hermione still have Harry's Marauders Map and his Invisibility Cloak? He needs Dobby to get those back.

"... the marriage of a Black into the Potter family was not common knowledge ..." What about Charles Potter and Dorea Black? They were believed (by most fans I know) to be James Potter's parents until Rowling revealed Fleamont and Euphemia on Pottermore a few years ago. A surprising number of fanfics have placed them in these roles. According to Sirius, most Pureblood families were related somewhere down through the lines.

Biting her toenails? What, are there no nail clippers (or clipping charms) in the Wizarding world? Toenail-biting sounds rather Crabbe-and-Goyle-ish, to me. **shuddering**

Oh, dear, Harry! That's bad.

"... even though it was Harry's idea to go find her and save her, Ron actually cast the spell." True. But I think Magic might go with intent and other issues here. After all, it was Ron's fault she was there in the first place. I'd say that cancelled out any debt to Ron. Harry definitely had more direct contact and interaction with the Troll.

"[Hermione] had grown used to the idea that if she needed something, the money was there for her to spend and would be there for when she finished school. She had never planned to keep Weasley around once school was done. He was going to have an unfortunate accident of some sort and she would be left will all of the money. Then, she would change her name and disappear to Europe where she would start a new life." Gracious! I don't think Ron has been a very good influence on Hermione ... or maybe it's the other way around.

I'm curious ... Do Hermione and Ron think Harry should just roll over and let them continue their thievery? I think Harry should present her parents with the evidence of what she and Ron have done. That way, when she wants to attend a Muggle university, they won't be willing to hand over the cash. They seem honorable enough and will probably tell her to finance her own tuition. Then again, she might decide to knock 'em off and set it up to look like the DEs did it. Then she can play the grieving daughter and cash in on their deaths. This Hermione really hasn't any scruples, apparently.

I hope Harry doesn't make a habit of murder. Because I know what Umbridge is, I find it hard to lament her death. I only lament that Harry did it. Still, she did try to murder him with the Dementors. I sometimes wonder if she truly doesn't believe Voldy is back or if she knows and is trying to undermine the Ministry. She is a schemer and doesn't strike me as an "ostrich" type. I think she's more likely to want to know the truth and see how she can manipulate the situation to her advantage - even if it means denying the thing she knows is true. I guess it's a moot point now, however,

Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.