Thanks for writing a cool story and I liked how you wrote Jack, Tony.

This is an interesting look into how Tony ended up taking the path of evil. I'm still trying to get my head around Tony's new career path and enjoyed your take on the situation.

In many ways Jack and Tony reacted with a very similar self-destructive behaviour to their wives deaths... the only difference is that Tony's choice also involved other peoples destruction! But I certainly see how Jack, and his for the greatest good, would struggle with Tony's decision.

Natalie

not bad. but, it almost doesn't sound like tony. idk. it's too "old tony". he's not the tony we once knew, and this piece makes him sound like he's out of season 1. but pretty decent anyway.

You wrote this very well. I too loved that scene and wanted more of it. I wish for you to continue!

Excellent story.

Thanks! I really enjoyed this!

I like this a lot. I love that you've been able to get into their minds and think like both of them would. You've kept them very in character. Jack was always so altruistic and all about the greater good. Tony has been less so over the years and I could see him taking the path he took. I would like to know what made him change his mind. What did he see that suddenly made him worry about what Michelle might think of him.

Well written. Good story.

That was really good! I really liked the way you characterized Tony, letting Jack see the small part on the inside that was still the old Tony that missed Michelle. That was really very well done, the best part of the whole story... but it was all good!