Idk, fam... The DDLG part had me a little bit weirded tf out, not gonna lie...

Wow loved this story! Hope to read more from you in the future

I truly DESPISE so called 'authors' who use rape as a plot device.

Thank you. Loved the story. Very angsty indeed but you're a truly gifted writer and hope to read other labyrinth fics you may write in the future.

Love me a Jareth POV

After feeling very angry in previous chapters I have to say I gave a little cheer in this one. :)

rozwija się napięcie coraz intensywniejsze, czuję, że nie oderwę się od tego fic dopuki nie skończę całości

Very good story, i hope to see more from you in the future!

I liked this fic - I like unconventional relationships etc, this one was an interesting read. Sarah felt really beaten down - father dies, brother dies, step mother turns into an abused addict - it's easy to see why she'd be such a mouse of a woman. Tasha - still has my sympathies -

Jareth - so easily forgiven? A tad misogynistic on Sarahs part to want Rasha dead while forgiving Jareth without any repercussions. Misogynistic on Jareth's part to forgive himself - most of Sarah's hurt would have come from his actions.

I'm curious as to why Sarah would choose to have this child. Surely the underground would have some equivalent magic abortion. Or is she super anti roe v wade?

I'd definitely read the next Laby fic you write!

Loved the way this story was written... it was like a heartfire romance novel which I love It would have been the perfect story if Jareth had not cheated on her... :_( maybe made it look like he did just in front of Sarah to hurt her, but in the end it’s revealed that it was just all an act and he couldn’t find it in himself to go through with it... knowing that he would cheat on her just because of jealousy and revenge... that just really broke my heart... how does one forgive that betrayal...? :_( It would be a wish come true if there would be another version without him cheating... lolol ;P Apart from that, thank you soo much I did enjoy the story and the M rating and the smut... woah! Amazing! Hot! Hot! Hot! ;P

What did I just read? Is this a tragedy or a romance? I don't like this one bit. How can I possibly keep reading a story where Jarerh is cheating on his wife/queen?

I have NEVER watched Labyrinth. I'll start with that. I've seen clips and heard the music but never watched it. With that in mind, this story is AMAZING. I don't normally jump out of my Anime territory but this one did it. I always wondered how Labyrinth could have so many stories written about it and you've shown me HOW. You've given me an interesting experience that now has me hooked. This story made me laugh, cry, seethe in anger and fall in love . I hope to see more stories written as well as this one. I will forever judge fanfiction with this as my standard. Thank you for such a wonderful story. P.S. I now have this strange attraction to David Bowie and will blame it on you. xD

I love your story and waiting to continue it so bad!)))

Wow. Much heavier than I expected.

Really enjoying the story!