I like this :)

What a great story. It took the whole Sam & Jack story in a different direction. Thanks

It doesn't feel finished to me, there's too much you left unresolved. It's a fantastic story, I just wish there was more of it.

I really enjkyed this! You write the characters' voices so recognisably, now I am off to see what else you have written.

This is so poignant. There is a sadness to it when remembering all that Jack and Sam did for Earth, and I guess you could say the galaxy. But, it appeared that there selflessness meant nothing, and they were thrown off their world. So now they live together in what most people would call a backwater, living as farmers, but openly together-something being on Earth wouldn't give them. So the Kinsey's of this world win, but did they. In the end Anubis will attack, or the ORI will come, someway the Earth will be destroyed.

Daniel irritates me in this. Asking Jack and Sam to go back on the slim, very slim, chance that they will be validated. Why should they. Sometimes it is better just to give in, and let the chips fall where they may.

Wow. This was a cool read. Nice job.

Simply wonderful. Well done with the characterization and their relationship.

I really liked your story. I'm looking forward to the sequel.

I just re-read this in preparation for A Tightly Woven Thread. Good story. Looking forward to the sequel.

Wonderful story, great characterizations. If you ever have the urge to add to it I'd be delighted.

Great story :) I love how you capture the relationship between Jack and Sam so subtley and so well.

youve set up a sequel, you should do one. its a good concept. maybe also a prequel, cuz you sorta started in the middle. great story tho

This story was amazing but I have to say it gave me mixed feelings. I don't know, it just kind of depressed me but was a pleasant feeling at the same time. Good story

Very nice story. Wonderful job.

Oh... that was great! Very sweet, slow, gentle, and perfect. You got everything right and you have a great voice