LOL Agon seems so cute yet evil XD Id probably adopt him out if he was my kid *not true*

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This was funny XD Agon's lack of self is horrible, but in a funny way. I agree, Agon's a complete jerk. That poor guy Unsui, makes me glad I'm an only child!

Hi just wanted to say that I think you got the characters off somewhat.

the way you wrote Agon is very bias and Unsui is somewhat out of character. Unsui understands Agon very well (most of the time) and would never think of him as a brat, sure he'd get annoyed by his antics but he wouldn't curse about it. Unsui is very, very, very, restrained and mature.

Agon is a very intelligent, arrogant person. His entire life he's been told he's the best and he has the skills to prove it. It's given him a sense of entitlement and superiority. He hates people like hiruma who work so hard because they're butting into his screen time. Now I'm not saying that he isn't a bastard, he totally is. But he definitely wouldn't curse that much or at least like that. he would totally berate Unsui for his social skills and he would yank at Unsui's hair he would NEVER yet it out. Despite appearances Agon loves his brother. They're twins they may be completely different but they could never hurt the other with out hurting themselves. They're too close.

They're polar opposites Agon is an ass-kicking party animal. Unsui is a prude, a sexy prude, but a prude. Unsui is so reliant on Agon to fulfill his dreams and do something he can't hate Agon. Agon is fully aware of this a never does anything that could really hurt him because Unsui is his support. If he's upset (if that's possible) he goes to Unsui not his brothel or anyone else. With out Unsui's steady hand he'd be incredibly unstable (or at least very, very bitchy).

I hope this is actually useful. I sort of feel like I ranted about them without a point but I love them so much (especially Agon :D) that I'll take any chance to talk about them. I hope you'll write more about them! I'll cry if I scared you away from them, they're so cool they need more love