that was awesome :D you should make more chapters for it, have something dramatic occur :D

Hehe, wonderful one-shot. You're a talented writer. _

~Lightning Blue Eyes

So, I'm reading all your smutty Ganondorf fics, and when reading them in succession it's sort of like a montage where Ganondorf seduces and then deflowers all the virgins in Hyrule. Very funny stuff.

Malon and Ganondorf was a very strange pairing indeed, and I'm still uncertain about the integrity of the characters, but your writing is flawless otherwise :)

pretty sweet tale

I gotta say, this wass very strange, but extremely well-written! I especially loved that last line. XD

Great work.

Great story!

It's written & described very well!

Keep up the great work! _

I love the two of them together. Nicely done!

Yay smuts! I love how you detail. It's really good. Sequel?