Woo! They finally enter the Fire Seal! I wonder how that's going to turn out.

I like Sean. Can we see more of him, please? A lot more? Also, really random question, but do you plan to have any romance in this story? It's fine if you don't; I was just thinking Sean and Ally would make a cute couple. Maybe he can join the journey?

Ignore me, I'm stupid.

Update soon please!

:D:

I really like this story along with all the reference to other games and movies. Keep writeing please!

:O this is some of the best writing ive read on fanfiction so far, I love this game so much and the way u turned it into an awesome story just amazes me. and how do you write with such humor, you make the whole story funny and interesting making people want to keep reading. please update soon and keep up the good work

Hm very interesting, can't wait to see what happens next.

BlackRose

Hm, I think it's a -good- thing that you aren't taking it so... seriously. I haven't read something like this just for the humor of it in a long time. Maybe one of these days you'll turn serious, but for now, it's going along just fine. .

The one objection I have is your spelling and grammar foibles. If you'd let me beta for you, I could fix those "your/you're" errors, and the words that spell-check doesn't catch. The Grammar Nazi in me yearns to be released, eh? n.n I can keep her down with cookies, but she really loves correcting people, and I can't help it more often than not.

But I digress. Sorry for the ramble, it happens with me sometimes...

-Aion 13

“Good luck, Colette. Lloyd, Genis, Ally. You two should go on home.”

... you two eh? it like ur not even in the story.. or are you dun dun dun...

ah what ever swords are best for fighting zombies anyway they don't run out of gas or bullets

Angoy eh?...kratos's ass?

what trail indeed. spelled trial.

GAH! YOU PISSED KRATOS OFF! HA~ then again that kinda works!

lols loved this chapter can't wait for the next one!

I'm so glad that you updated! Well, I think this chapter is just as funny as the others.

I hope to review the next chapter!

The silly mercenary would kill you for just calling him a silly mercenary. I know he would.

very good can't wait till you put the next chapter out! XD! How r u going to stay in the journy won't kratos protest to have too many kids?

more plz soon

I would mess the storyline up so badly...

It's like 6:32 A.M. here and I'm still f-ing tired, darn you daylight savings! TToTT

Anyway, loved it and update!

*walks into review wearing neck brace* See? Whiplash. You fast, fast updater. Hee hee...

I noticed more errors towards the end of the chapter. Don't worry about how fast you update your story, no-one is going to kill you if you don't update in a day. Take your time, enjoy writing your story, and for Martel's sake, get some sleep! P Okay, I swear I'm done with the preachy-ness...for now...*shifty eyes* On to the story!

I'm interested to see how your battle scenes are going to develop down the road (ie. battle with Kvar, Summon Sirits, other bosses) Yes, very interested.

That omelette sound sort of all right. Definitly without the tomatoes though. M...Chocolate...*drools*

Your story has made me create the mental picture of Dirk in a suit with a breifcase saying "I'll be back from the meeting in a coupld of days, Lloyd. Don't forget to feed Noishe." ...Thank you for that...

A slumber party? Oh the possibilities...I couldn't even list all my guesses, so I guess I'll just wait and see. )

Anticipating your next update,

-Jam

That chapter was awesome as well. Im gonna stick with you for the storyline!

If you really want ot mess up the storyline...

My good idea!: If you go with the chosens group, when you first run into Sheena you should shout 'its that girl from Tethe'alla whose name I forgot!' really loud. Then Chaos happens!

Great chapter! I liked it! Thanks for updating so soon