Awwww gosh, they're so cute! Well, naughty too, but cute nonetheless!

So cute! Perfect ending to an incredible fic :)

Holyshit I had no idea Roy would just go out and propose her! Whoa it is so good!

i put this on my personal canon which happen after manga end,

xD i realize what Roy planning after 4th shot.
after 5th shot my mind screm it xD haha. happy im right.

Hi, I'm in royai-ship and I like your works. Can I translate them into Chinese and post on some fan websites in China? Actually, I have done the translation of Ready Aim Fire and post it out. This is the url: post/342c0f_12c796171
My English is quite poor as you can see in the comment, but I really like royai. Hope you can agree.
ps: there have been 2 people say that your work is very sweet.

What happened after? Was that a real proposal? Did she say yes? That's kind of slack if it's just for roy to win lol. Roy must be esctatic for winning lol. Anyways, nice short story. Good luck with your future stories.

HAHAHA, I guess I have a really dirty mind because I was thinking of something completely different. But really? Roy is so cocky XDD He couldn't have asked her any other way.

OH SNAP!

Pure gold, this. You embodied their relationship perfectly. Keep it up!

Oh my god, oh my god! Of all the things i thought he could say I didn't imagine that! Oh my god, I'm laughing so hard and i'm also smiling really big cause this was too cute! Ahhhhhhhhhh! :D poor riza, and lucky roy

Hilarious! You definitely know how to capture thirr relationship.

simply, I love you with all my heart your stories

Hah! Now that's one way to get her to miss. Very clever. ;)

That was just fantastic. I'm the 100th reviewer, so do I get a prize? One Hundred reviews for a oneshot is incredible. I can see why though. It's a short quick read that is fun and cute.

This was fabulous. Throughout it I had a inkling of what would happen, but the way you executed it was fantastic.