| Reviews for Heroes School |
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stella chapter 20 . 12/29/2011 Fier drill, food fight maybe |
Kayla chapter 20 . 9/27/2010 Add some drama between the kids that's always fun introduce a new character who turns out to be a huge biatch or something and gets all the guys attention but make her have some deep dark secret and weird power so she bonds with sylar lol |
synjax chapter 20 . 8/6/2010 well, there's already the flood, and Gabe's exposure as Sylar, and the boys dancing chicken soooo... hmmmmm... how about... well like shit, how 'bout a robbery? something really valuable hidden in the school or somethin'... dunno really... or how 'bout... well 'fya want fluff make two enemy OCs (girl-boy 'course) get detention for some reason and then poof! they're friends, they like each other, blah. kinda like Ron an' Hermione. or how 'bout the school accidentally set on fire? maybe even someone was murdered? (random / unimportant / insignificant-to-the-major-plot OC) well, tha's abou' all i can give ye righ' noq, so if i've got any new ideas i'll just PM ye if tha's a'roigh'. Btw, nice job on the chapter! you gots a cliffie there. YAY! Kipitap! :D |
synjax chapter 19 . 8/6/2010 lolz to the last line! XD 'Cos it's SO true! XD |
SylarTookMyPower chapter 20 . 8/5/2010 if you introduce a new character, than he could start hitting on kara and then kevin would get jealous or something... good story! i love it! |
Angellover-Tvd-Charmed chapter 20 . 8/4/2010 Claire and west or claire and adam and can you have more claire in it i love her and this story is good cant for more |
TheScream chapter 18 . 7/23/2010 Awesome, you're back! I feared you had quit on this fic entirely :) Didn't really like this chapter too much because I didn't really feel it contributed to the fanfiction in entirety but hey, it wasn't bad. |
sm4rty chapter 19 . 6/20/2010 awesome again it's nice to have some chapters like this just to see some background story's or there character i love it pleaz update soon |
Peter Farkas chapter 19 . 6/20/2010 On Facebook, I would say one word: Like :-D Hell, you really get the new-old looks of Gabriel: morally acceptable, but somewhere still grim and cynical. And I suppose (since Cam's not my idea) that you got her as well. I just can't wait to see her interact with one of my little friends (I hope you know who I am talking about but I don't like spoilers) And still I can't wait to see "Muties go home!" banners :-P My only advice: Continue! I'm really looking forward to see what you're up to. |
johncorn chapter 19 . 6/20/2010 Awesome keep it up. I want more Peter though. |
sm4rty chapter 18 . 6/15/2010 i realy like this story hope you update soon |
SylarTookMyPower chapter 18 . 6/14/2010 this is the BEST story i have read in awhile. i have t0 admit, when i read the first chapter i thought it was weak, but the rest of the story is REALLY writing, your really good at !i almost you actually know whats going to happen at the trip or are you going to make it up as you go along?CHECK OUT MY PROFILE! actually, don't. never mind. |
final5 chapter 18 . 6/14/2010 Glad you're back :) Good chapter. |
synjax chapter 18 . 6/14/2010 a platypus. their mascot is a platypus. a PLATYPUS? :insert a wtf look: wait, how can there be THREE basketball goals? Kara is EVIL! 8D I LOVE HER! 83 lol! I love Mohinder! always listening in on conversations thru the intercom! XD "...Not a lot of people wanted to take Advanced Biochemistry." ~Agreed! "...And, well, I don't mean to brag, but I've always been kind of a criminal mastermind." ~Awe-some. Artemis Fowl much? WHY DID IT HAVE TO TAKE YOU A YEAR TO UPDATE? D: T.T Puh-leeeeeeeaase update sooner! :3 |
johncorn chapter 18 . 6/13/2010 Can't wait for next chapter |