| Reviews for Discovering Beauty |
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ninnynat chapter 56 . 8/1 I loved this story from beginning to end! Well done. Thank you! |
mybrat2006 chapter 56 . 6/9 This is my absolute favorite Lucius and Hermione fic. I love how you wrote it with such deep feelings for each other. |
DiamondHeart21 chapter 10 . 6/1 See now this is over the line. She shouldn’t have allowed any of this to happen while she was still in a relationship. I understand everyone is flawed, but come on. Hopefully she breaks up with Ron after this. |
DiamondHeart21 chapter 8 . 6/1 I really, really hope no one cheats on anyone else. That is one of the things I absolutely do not agree with. If Hermione is unhappy in her relationship, she needs to end it before starting anything else. |
Ariana chapter 56 . 5/26 This is a phenomenal story! Well done! Any spin-off story of Draco and Sophie in the making? Her reaction to finding out about his old prejudices? Their...courtship ;) |
UnlikelyPresence chapter 34 . 5/3 Hermione: Has a 2h30 nap, feels invigorated. Not 20 minutes later, has mind-blowing sex, and is immediately exhausted enough to fall into the "deepest sleep". I must admit I am jealous of that lifestyle lmao |
UnlikelyPresence chapter 20 . 5/2 That was so cute! It makes sense that Lucius would work well with children - why else would Draco adore him? I think movies!Lucius was a little too harsh with the Draco-bullying like in the Borgin and Burke's scene in CoS. Don't get me wrong, I love Jason Isaacs, but I remember watching him say in an interview that he bullied Draco to make the audience feel a bit more sympathetic towards him" or something. I think it makes more sense that Draco WAS just very spoiled and used to getting his way, and bullied the so-called Golden Trio because he was jealous. |
RubySoho91 chapter 56 . 4/20 Okay. I’m taking a deep breath. I’m new to the FanFiction world. I’ve always been an artist, dabbled in writing, and most certainly am the biggest daydreamer you can imagine. I’ve always had dramatic, romantic, sexy and dark stories in my head, and I’ve always found myself wishing someone out there would put them to paper for me. You’ve done exactly thatgiven me the type of story I’ve been wanting for such a long time. Your writing is some of the favorite I’ve ever read, and I’ve read quite a lot! Just the right amount of description, angst, drama, darkness, emotion. It really is fantastic. You’ve taken us on such an emotional journey here and I really felt all of it (hopefully as you intended we would). I found myself teary eyed throughout the last the chapters. When I joined FanFiction I had no idea the scope of imagination or the talent of the writers here. I am utterly impressed with your talent, and I hope hope hope you continue to write for all of us. I want to thank you for sharing this story with us, and let you know that it provided me with a great outlet of escapism during a very hard time in my life. I am eternally engrossed in the darkness of the “bad guy”, I’m hoping you continue in that progression. I’m so sad to see all of this end, but you did so at just the right place. I’ll have to be finding a new JI inspired fanfic (hehe). Just as a side notemay I make a request? I have been watching the series “Black Sails” and am loving the character of Captain Flint. Given the story arc I don’t see him coming out of his “hell bent on death or glory” mindset to take a lover, but how interesting would it be we could explore the depth of his mind a bit? Anyway, he’s quite dashing. Thank you again! |
Aimless Creation chapter 44 . 4/10 If he doesn’t tell her he loves her soon, I’m going to fucking lose it. That is all. |
splodee chapter 56 . 3/23 A lovely, sexy story. Read it in one looonnnggg sitting, only stopped for food and bathroom breaks lol. Nice job. |
splodee chapter 13 . 3/23 Ok, Lucius had Hermione tits out in the middle of the lunch in plain daylight...lollll kudos |
Jazmin Li chapter 56 . 3/5 La ameeee ! Me encanta que hayan tenido un final hermoso. Gracias por tu historia! Saludos de se argentina |
MsProfessor chapter 56 . 2/3 This is in my top 10 all-time fanfiction pieces. I especially appreciated that Hermione wasn't perfect; so often she is written as if she could never really hurt anyone. And, well, we all do at some point in life, don't we? I wish she could have been honest with Ron right away, but I think it's more realistic that she actually waited to tell him. I also love that you didn't go with the much overused "Ron cheated" trope. Ron, to me, never seemed like the cheating type (but so often this is used as a plot device so Hermione can be with whomever she chooses). I concur with you - Lucius is hot (Jason Issacs is hot). Your writing is hot. Sincere congratulations. I've been devouring your stories, and so far this is my favorite. |
OMGoodness chapter 4 . 1/14 Well - let's see - hmmm - unsatisfactory sex with the Ronnikins - this author did indicate Ron bashing (hopefully) - well 56 chapters and complete - all I can do is hope atm "giggles". |
mybrat2006 chapter 1 . 1/5 One of the best Lumione stories! Love the visuals. |