I loved this story so much. It is brilliant, and while I hold no hope that you will continue it I still wish you would. Writing is always meant to make you want more, and I almost feel as though I have never understood that as well as I do now! Thank you for the wonderfully tragic read.

Best wishes,
Naruto Meowzers

OMG! It was beautiful ️ I love your stories

Type your review here.I never read a story that hurts my soul and makes me cry this much its hunting and very sad it makes u wish life could give them a break after this hole heartache its just a sad amazing story the is non like it its so unique on a lead of its own

Holy freaking Hokage. You are seriously trying to kill me with the feels with these first 2 chapters. I don't think my heart can take anymore heartbreak for these 2. Gonna have to go take a break from this to let my heart try and shadowstitch itself back together after taking that Rasenshuriken at point blank range, dattebayo.

Wooooow that was good

oh god... I cried all three times... you have a gift... and there's a reason I don't read angst... but after those wonderful reviews I couldn't skip past this one... and your stories were so potent so dark yet so beautiful... I'm still crying...

O.O That was way more interesting than some of the published stuff I've seen. Bravo! I loved the end, it leaves more to our imaginations.

That was fucking insane. The darkness and alluring nature of Naruto and Itachi's bond really drew me in. It was well written, well expressed, and well finished. I love it!

OMG I'm in tears with this chapter!

I love it I love it I love it! Hee it's leaves a warm feeling in my tummy. :3

damn. talk about dark and compelling tragedy

This was horribly, horribly hard to read. So much passion yet twisted so darkly. I'm not sure who I felt sorrier for, Kiyoshi or Itachi? If only Itachi hadn't been insane maybe he could have loved Kiyoshi as himself instead of being more concerned over keeping his mate away from everyone else. And that last part was just horrifyingly creepy. Good job! It really read like an old, epic style tale. Obviously one of the tragic ones.

I cried! This was so saaaad! How unfair, they love each other so much... Yet they barely had a chance to be together before naruto died... Nooooooo

awwwwwwwwwwwwww i love thisss

*hiks*
...Co-completed? I hope it's not yet. I'm waiting for the next chapter! Please, I want more!
ASAP!

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