I love it. You know, according to an interview with Milo Ventimiglia, Peter's supposed to be "going off the deep end" in the next few episodes. I'm looking forward to it- Peter needs an emotional struggle.

Everybody else has fought and overcome their demons. But Peter never HAD any demons until Arthur messed him up so badly and screwed up his capacity for empathy (the reason his powers aren't working now, as they work through empathy). He's going to have a tough time of it.

I like how you captured that and blended it with that essential... Peter-ness... :)