It's so promising though.
Unfortunately it stops there.

Heya! I noticed you never finished this story. Shame. It's so good and I love how it's just so...well different. I especilly love how you write Could.
Oh author please rise from your fanfiction grave and finish this marvelous piece of fiction! (•-•)

Nice story.
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I love this story! :D It was a bit slow during the first few chapters in the lifestream, but I really like where it's going. I hope you update soon!

I like the story so far, please update soon.

really good I enjoyed reading the story but it was super sad and unfair for Vincent and cloud of the other world don’t you think so?

Great story so far : ) I look forward to discovering more about Cloud's new abilities. :3 Update soon please!

Love it! Can't wait for the next chapter.

This is really good. Please update it soon!

ypu need to update soon so your fans can read your story and love it more. i like it and I will be your fan and merry Christmas and a happy New Year.

NOOOOOOOOOOO! u must keep going!

It's past May 12. You promised! I love this story. And you must know how disappointing it is when a story is abandoned, especially a good one.

I enjoyed reading this, please post again as soon as possible.

sounds nice so please keep it up

I love this fic so far. I really hope though that Cloud saves Genesis too he's one of my favorite characters. And wait if Cloud's mako and even Jenova cell's went with him then does Vincent still need to watch over his body? Oh well, can't wait until the next chapter although it has been months since this has been last updated. But I have to ask though will he get his First Sword (the one with multiple different blades inside it) back I love that sword. I also loved how Sephy acted in regards to Cloudy in the earlier chapters. And lol Kadja~ You gotta love Vincent too, hopefully Chaos makes an appearance also because I find it amusing some of the Vincent/Chaos talking interaction I read. ;P