I love this so much!

Absolutely brilliant! You captured the twins' emotions and the tension between them very well. You really did their link justice, and the characterization of Nuada was perfect. I love your writing style and I love this story. Well done!

OMG! This was the best I've read so far for the pairing!

It's really good!
How we enter in is mind,
how you describe his feelings and the special link between them both...
and in a court scene well imagined and inserted!

I like it! What's different about this fan fiction is that it deals with the themes of incest as being not just something swatted away because this couple is condemned to belong together, but that it is love withstanding her restraint and his lack of denial of his own feelings. He is the powerful player here, and her rejection is futile, because somehow she in some way is chastising him...? I could be reading this wrong, somehow, and I respect that. However I must say that I enjoyed reading his actions and the persuasiveness of the argument for his love for her.

Good job!

Oh that was very good!

~mOs

for being your first fic its really good! I have to thankyou. I had spent like ten min. looking for a nuada/nuala fic that covered this issue, of them being abnormaly close. I know that in the movie nuada says to her "father always did try to seal your heart form mine" somethin like that (;)) so I was really intrigued that very few people actually paid attention to them. And i guess the M rate was given for the incest feelings? yeah disturbing BUT fascinating! anyway great job yeah a bit of none congruency here and there but I liked it, very intense!

This was great! You really did an excellent job! I would absolutely read more of this from you!

This was written really well! I feel like it captured their personalities and characters perfectly :)

Wow. That was amazing and creepy and haunting all that once. A lovely combination, really.

Your writing is amazing. I'm in awe.

OUTSTANDING! *applauds* This was amazing! You caught the emotion and the tension between them so wonderfully! You also did a PHENOMENAL job characterizing their "link." FINALLY, an author who does it without making them have a goddam hive mind! It's such an OOC extreme, I think, thanks for not falling to that.

That was actually very beautiful... Thank you. ~LC

I liked this a lot. Nuada and Nuala are one of my favorite pairings- I never see it as incest somehow though, they are just too much of the same person to call each other siblings. Idk I would like to see one where Nuala is more willing, maybe realizing how well they fit? I don't know but great job.

~Heart

Very beautiful, Nuada/Nuala ftw~3 Though it was a bit sad to me as well, y'know knowing what's going to happen next with Nuada (& Nuala as well) it's sad~ Óo