This is really great. I can't wait to read more about Naruto and his ability. Update soon!

i might not be to happy with the fact that he doesn't want to be a ninja he'd rather be a preventor but i'm still really happy with this story so far and hope to read more chapters in the near future

please update awesome fic

interesting fic, quite the mind ouzzler at some point...can't wait to read more

Looking foward to the next chapter so keep up the good work and update when ya can :)!

neat bloodline that is full of surprises

Wow, sucks to be Naruto...that is like a heavy consequence of one's abilities...eh, bring on the next chapter soon!

Please update this soon. I want to know what happens next. Please I really,really,really want to know what happens next. Please do not reply.

good

Truthful Critic: You're criticizing the author about their grammar when you can't even spell "worst". I've read plenty of stories that have much worse grammar than this. This person's grammar may not be correct but at least I can understand what they're trying to say.

Calling this story a piece of trash because of some grammatical errors is just plain stupid. You need to find someone to help you with your own spelling before you can make a harsh statement like that.

You may very well have the worth grammar I have ever seen. You constantly use place words in places they do not go. Here is just one example, so you understand I am not talking out of my ass 'How did Naruto know about such things'. He is thinking in present tense, How DOES would be correct. You do this often, in many places, in all of your chapters. You need to seriously either delete this story, or find a beta and rewrite it. This is a piece of trash.

very good work

Virtues...hahaha from Gundam 00

is naruto gonna summon the gundam meisters? roflmao XD that'll be awsome

great chapter

good fic

I love Naruto's kekkei genkai.

Please hurry up with next chapter.