"Why are you out here in the cold by yourself?"
Awww, Zoro cares :P

i LOVE this story! so cute sanji is such an asshat sometimes ._.;; heh but when he's jelly it's super cute! i think usopp suits being an artist anyways great story i look forward to reading more.

I love this. So simple and cute and I adore Usopp's POV. You've written some of my favourite SanUso pieces. :D

STFU. This was an awesome story! : D Like a favorite of mine now! Seriously u I like...love it 333

i dont think you should be harsh on yourself for this one, i really liked it because of its innocent sweetness that is hard to get for some people keep up the good work!

i liked it.

This was gorgeously written, the first-person for Usopp was great! Could really feel his frustration and then his own weakness, lol. This was a real sweet snippet of the pair of them, hope that you write more soon!

actually, i liked it :3

This is just darling, I have to say. I have this huge crush on Sanji, but I love pairing him with guys, too, and no one seems to like Usopp! This really is sweet, it's one of the best I've read for this pairing. Well done.

~ Oni

I like this, it's a good personality profile. I didn't catch any spelling or grammar errors while reading. It's a good story. Welcome back, by the way; I hope things get better for you and your family.

Forget about the OOC-ness (it wasn't that bad anyway), that was so ADORABLE! :3

i liked it. a /little/ ooc, but forgivable, because it was freaking cute. honestly, i didn't think it was very ooc anyway. you pulled off first person very well. i noticed some tense-discrepancy, but not much.~