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Yes.

This is very, very good.

Absolutely no concrit, because this is too beautiful!

I love your nonOOC characterization, your voice, your, I dunno, punctuation!

Dark and angsty. Wow...

Loved it.

Poor Thalia TT

love ur story

Short and the way I like good.

That was ... deep. A really wonderful insight into Thalia's mind.

ohmygod.

CrayolaMarkers wasn't kidding when she said this oneshot was angsty & sad & tear-jerking.

*wipes tears*

perfectly awesome.

:D

-toffeecakesxox.

Oh, wow...why haven't I reviewed this yet?

Anyway. I love how deep, how true to form Thalia is here...and omigoodness you're talented with imagery. I can exactly picture Luke's eyes, and besides, this fic makes me really, really sad, like I'm starting to miss Luke. You added, like, eighteen layers to Thalia's personality.

AWESOME. POSSUM. JOB.

xoxo

Mer Bear

So well done! I loved it! Thalia was very IC, which can be hard to do sometimes.

Deep dude...

Wow, I have to agree with the other reviewers, you did a great job of capturing Thalia's character.

Don't mind my immaturity when I say that Luke needs to get a life. Or maybe it's Kronos that needs one.

You're writing in this fic is missing something to me. I'm not sure what, unfortunately, but it seems like something isn't there.

Overall, lovely work from Kata-chan.

Absolutely stunning. Great capture of Thalia - I love the insight into her character.

Beautiful, beautiful story. Excellent pacing, brilliant character empathy, lovely writing style that added to a really sweet piece.

A lot of authors try to add too much into a short story, thinking it has to be all about the action, but I love how yours happened in just a moment, and came across so beautifully. Loved it.

Love,

believeinthegods

xx

Aww, poor Thalia. I love Thuke, and this was an awesome one shot!

Short but deep! I loved it! It captured Thalia pretty well.