So sad. It seems to come straight from the heart. Very well written, though. 'Scuse me, gotta dry my eyes. Keep up the excellent work!

aawwww that's sooo cute!

Thanks a lot! Now I'm depressed! By the way, nice song! The fic was okay, except it was sad!

(Careful, Spoiler Here)

"She wouldn’t have to experience the hell that follows after Neil’s death. She’d do anything to prevent if from happening to her." Perhaps this could be a reason why she didn't really try to escape the phantom that got her... Good fic. Keep writing!

sweet. _

jeebus that was a good fic .. there's not too many final fantasy movie fics.. blech.. i still didnt get how they got the final spirit.. _ newayz i luved ur ficcy!

Not bad at all for a first attempt. I'd say pretty damn good actually, keep it up!