I'm wondering what the fuss was about with Edward teaching her to swim. My daughter's birthday is in late March, and by early July the summer she turned two she could swim without floaties. It especially important to teach a child to swim if the child seems to be drawn to the water - though I admit learning in the ocean wouldn't be the easiest place to learn. My younger brother wasn't supposed to go underwater until he was five or six because he had tubes in his ears, and I can remember how difficult it was to get him over his fear of putting his head under the water once he was finally able to begin swimming lessons (I also remember clearly having to dive in fully dressed after him one day when he accidentally fell into the deep end of the pool). Personally I feel the sooner a child learns to swim the better - they even have classes for babies to teach them to roll over onto the backs and float in case they accidentally fall in.

What an evil child!

This story was absolutely amazing. One of the best twilight fanfictions I have ever read for sure. I thoroughly enjoyed my time reading this work of art.

I'm really liking this story. Thanks for writing it.

Awesome story Please update

Great story

This is a great take on the cannon. For a bit I thought perhaps Bella might have been a hybrid but guess she is just a very gifted child.

So good :)

This is my favourite Twilight fanfiction story. I wish I could see a film version of this story.

So far so good...
You're a pure genius, you're amazing!
It better ends good!
One of THE best fanfic

I officially hate the wolves... The little affection I had for them
Gone! Zero! Zilch! Poof! Gone! Give her back to Edward dammit!

Oh lord! This better not be about the wolves!

I hate it when in stories Jasper and Bella get close... I mean why's that?... Us he the protector or something..call me impartial but I love it when Edward's the one protecting her and is her mate!

They're so sweet... I wish Edward and Bella have a string bond.

This story was brilliantly creative, well written and intriguing. I read straight through & I can't wait to read the sequel! You are a truly gifted writer.