YOU SAID EARLIER SHE WAS 20

THATS CONTRADICTORY! YOU SAID LAST CHAPTER SHE WAS 20

"Pen-man". Ah, I love it! :D Honestly, Boone's frantically asking everyone for pens was probably one of my all time favorite LOST moments. I'm loving this story so far! :)

No matter how many times I read, or watch this scene where Boonie dies, it breaks my heart all the same.

Hey. I just wanted to tell you that I really, really like this story so far. Im hooked and will probably be up all night reading it :)

You are a very talented writer; your description and the whole idea of this story is very impressive. Cant wait to read further into it and explore it :)

So far this story is awesome!

So...she had a backpack strapped to her ankle? Does she have like a torso-sized ankle, or what? And the plane blanket is still on her after they crashed? That blanket would have been gone forever.

Her adoptive family is from England - Finchley - but moved to Connecticut? Why did they move there of all places? Are you, the author, from Connecticut? Is that why?

“I don’t really have a home.” - Uh, yes you do, idiot. It’s called Connecticut.

Why is your character related to anyone on the island? There is no reason for that to have happened. Sure, there are connections between everyone on the show, but none of that dumb soap opera nonsense.

She’s supposed to be English, right? Then why is the only evidence of her being so her use of the words ‘bloody’ and ‘mum?’ These are the only indications that she is.

Why does she always talk about eating mangos and staring off into space? Are mangos the only thing that she eats, or is that the only thing that you think grows on the island?

Also, the part where Kailljdfjkdf says that it's nice to have Charlie and Claire around because she likes hearing familiar accents. Claire is Australian. I'm pretty sure that this is obvious, as it’s said and shown in the show several times.

So, her flaw is having weak wrists? And then they found her violin, and she played for them? I see.

Why is Boone cuddling with her already? That’s way too early for that to be happening. At this point in the show Boone still has feelings for Shannon. They can’t just disappear all of a sudden because this new chick, who isn’t really anything special, shows up.

“Hello, John.” “It’s okay, Kay.” “Claire, are you all right?” “What happened, Charlie?” “No, Boone.” - Notice the commas.

Frankly, I’m shocked that no one has pointed these things out before, and that you seem to have not received any negative reviews on this story.

WOW! Ive never read a story that brought actual tears to my eyes like this one did, it was so amazing and so well written. The part where Boone died, i literally cried at that part, it was SO sad. Even though im new 2 the show i wanna get into it and i think this story helped. Look foward to reading the sequel :)

Mary

So I've just spent the past few days reading this story and the sequel and I love them! I really like your OC Kalie and she fits in well with the other characters.

I especially loved her relationship with Boone and I think you did a good job of keeping her story interesting even after her love interest had died.

seriously man, get that chick with boone, for one night, i will perscribe and review to every story or upload. the fans wan't to see a little carlyle/jarrah baby running around. so let her pop out boone's kid to add a little motherly love to your novel. all it is now is dark and a little romance but add that and it will garenty ratings i promice you that. a little one-on-one acion will greaty add passion to their relationship. so please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, pleace, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, pleace, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, pleace, please, please, please, please, please,

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please, do it!

buetiful novel though i think you could have taken their relationship to the nex level and then revel that she's pregnet with his child? props for story

kinda sucks that you chose to kill off boone! you shouldn't have.

Hey! Just read your story and I totally loved it! xoxo

I love this story, i cried when Boone died, and i love the sequel i can't wait until Boone comes back in Season 6 :D

This story has just been incredibly fun to read! I love the character you created in Kalie, and the emotional depth and evolution you gave to her character in her time on the island. You handled her beautifuly, not only in the face of the island events, but in the context of her relationship with Boone. I cannot wait to read the sequel!