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I loved this story .. you did such a great job I forgot to review ...so I'm leaving one now !

Count me among those who wants at least a cuddle and a caress from JIVA.

You did a masterful job with this story. The plot was excellent; well laid out and suspenseful. It was not always easy to follow for me, but with the help of google maps and translator, I think I followed pretty well. The initial suspicion between the two women followed by respect and a growing friendship was very well developed. I appreciate the manner in which Ziva cared for Jenny during her initial recovery and follow through at the embassy. She's a good control officer as you have described her. They're both workaholics and it shows - both very ambitious.

I really like your story. It fills a lot of gaps in both women's lives that canon has not provided. Well done.

Thanks for sharing.

Wow... I have to say that I'd always wondered about Jenny and Ziva's past and that you did a better job at writing it than I had ever imagined possible. Brilliant plot line... I started reading and literally couldn't stop. Both of them were wonderfully in character and it was all compellingly believable.

Thanks so much for writing, and for sharing,

Shailee )

What a great story! Thank you for writing such a well rounded tale of action, intrigue and friendship between Jenny and Ziva without getting cheesy or unbelieveable. One of the best stories I've read in a long time.

AH!

It's over! No

Great last couple of chapters! Love the ending ... or is it just a beginning? I expect a sequel to this...

I can even handle JIVA in it.

It's been a month since you compleated this, and I apologize for my late review, RL got crazy and I just got back to reading fanfic.

I for sure enjoyed the story. Your writing is fantastic. Clear and descriptive. Your inferences are nicely placed. It's actually refreshing to read a story where not every little detail is spelled out (I have that particular problem whenever I try to write).

I, being a huge Ziva fan, also appreciate any good story with Mossad!Ziva action in it. IMHO there aren't enough out there. Since you're so good at writing them, I hope (and beg) to see some more of them.

Keep writing and I'll keep making you laugh!

Wonderful story! I loved the character studies of both Jen and Ziva - you really captured them, I think. I think DPB should have thought of this himself, it slides so seamlessly into the canon. Can't wait to read more of your writing.

I thought this story superbly written. Plausible and well-researched, and interesting. I've put you on author alert and look forward to more from you very soon.

WK

You totally blew my socks of! I was like: oh my gosh, what's gonna happen next? It was so exciting and extremely well written and both characters were portraied very good. I so enjoyed reading ur fic and I hope there's gonna be a sequel!

Lizzy

Okay so my first question, straight off the bat... Do we get that story, too? LOL!

No really, This was such a great fic! I usually don't read stories like these more so because all the lingo and case talk etc confuse me, but this one didn't confuse me (as much ;)) I got it in the end lol!

You kept the two in character through out the entire fic, which is hard to come across in 'flashback' type fics.

As for Jiva... There was enough sub text (intended or not) to keep me happy hahah!

Look forward to more from you.

-Kylie :)

Loved it! Nice to see them both coming to an agreement at the end. Thoroughly enjoyed the whole story!

Thanks for taking the time to write such an awesome story, it was great to see the wonderful friendship between Ziva and David. I hope you write a sequel.

Brilliant story. It was very enjoyable and very well written. I love reading good pre-series stories and there's not many of them, so well done.

Well I enjoyed the whole thing. It was well written and intriguing without being convuluted.

Good story!

DARNED good story!

Thank you for sharing it with us.