Oh , how could you?! I've been crying my eyes out for the last 6 chapters and now this. Gods, it's horrible! I really hope it gets better soon...

Hey,
I just wanted to tell you, that I loved this story! I dont think I ever cried so much reading anything else and normally I dont like reading sad stories but with this one I just couldnt stop.
Everytime I was at a sad part I thought Why am I still reading this? I dont want to read anything that makes me cry today. Why am I torturing myself?. But I just couldnt stop and I didnt regret it. When I reached the last chapter I was like OK, I did it. I read this amazing story to the end and just cried about 19 times. Thats good. One more chapter and I doubt anything can make me cry after what I read till now. But you did it anyway. I sobbed so hard at the end that a concerned neighbour knocked and asked if I was alright.
So I just wanted to say thank you for writing this amazing story!

Sorry. I dont like Greg here. I believe that when we're sick, we should only focus on ourselves. Our caretakers shouldnt let us worry. Niel was dying and Greg left. He knew his lover was dying. He has all the time in the world to grieve, to sleep...Niel didn't. He shouldn't have been selfish.

I just found this story tonight, and I read it all the way through even though my eyes are burning! At first I wasn't sure if I'd enjoy it because of the OC, but Neil made the story worth reading even more. I laughed, cried and fell in love with Greg just a little bit more...

Thanks for sharing your incredible talent.

I loved this to like no end, Neil is like the OC in any fanfiction i've read ) you're awesome

This was amazing! I loved it :D

I absolutely loved this! I laughed, I cried, I sat nervously on the edge of my seat, thinking Greg wouldn't get to Nick in enough time.

I loved it!

One word. Beautiful!

Words cannot describe how beautiful and perfect this story is. The emotions, the characterisation, everything, was flawless.

And the dreams! oh my god, so stunning and full of meaning, makes me think your some kind of psychologist or something.

Finally. Neil. Best OC ever! )

This was beautiful. Words escape me. You definitely have a talent.

Usually, I very rarely cry at anything. I mean, Titanic, My sister's keeper, beaches, a crack in the line... none of them. But this was so emotional and so well written that a lot of the time I had to take little breaks because I was crying too much to read. Absolutely fantastic. I salute you.

xxx

yeah! i indeed tought/thaugt that;)

sorry my english isn't really good yet;)

-xxx-

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This was an amazing story! I really enjoyed it!

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I hope I'll be able to write something more constructive but not now I'm too upset (in a good way).

Loulou

you know I've never before added a story to my favourites before having read th ewhole thing. But Im going to go ahead and do it because this story is so brilliant. You literally made me cry. Neil was a great and realistic character that I fell in love with the moment he started hitting on Greg.

Im going to go and finish the story now. Thank you so much for writing it and I think if I try hard enough Ill be able to not be angry at you :P

Wow. Just finished this in a matter of three days, and it was phenom. Really, it blew me away. From your amazing writing, to just the pure, raw emotion in every character, especially Greg, I loved every word.

I have been looking for a way to get back into the Love for a while now, and this was perfect. Even though I hate 98% of OC's in fanfic, Neil captured my heart, and you should be proud to have created such a loved, complex, and well-written OC. The only other one in this fandom I can think of off the top of my head is Jan from Magg's Where You Are, and even then, she was Greg's mom, so its not completely OC.

Really, just beyond words at this point, it was amazing. I was laughing, bawling my eyes out, and ready to strangle Greg at one point, but I just kept reading and before I knew it, I had finished on WMTDB and wound up here.

I thought Hiding in the Rye was my fave by you, but I think this might take the cake. You really are, IMO, one of the best Love writers out there. This was such an amazing read, and I really, really, REALLY hope you keep writing for this ship, because it needs authors of your caliber.

I came across this story in the dessert archives. Was horrified when I got to the

2nd to last chapter and could not find more. I searched until it lead me here to this beautiful

ending. I had tears in my eyes reading through the toughest times, Neil and Greg's roller coaster

relationship. Times it had me smiling at times it had me wet in the eyes. The back and forth.

Nick's forming friendship and than being their, the aftermath. I so got lost in your story.

It didn't feel fake or forced at all. It just blew me away. Was sad to see it come to an end but

at the same time this last chapter was made of gold. Oh and the name! ::happysigh::