That was really awesome! I hope someday this continues. In other words, I hope you can make a sequel someday.

Loved the chase. Fun action, well coordinated in how it flowed

Good continuation of adventure. One thing caught me early however, "Ominous" was used to describe sounds of a flute... It is hard for me to imagine the sounds of a flute ever being ominous. Eerie, yes, but ominous no. Never thought about it before, but I find myself associating ominous with "bass" or deep sounds which a flute cant do.

The adventure continues!

Battle scene was intense and transition from the depressing defeat of Donald, Mickey, Minnie etc to the related adventure of Mulan and Mushu was really cool

Looking forward to seeing how Mushu and Mulan come in on this given the distant viewing via the mirror. Like the clip of action, from fight between Donald and Mickey to the abrupt fright of the pirate ship descending was quite entertaining. Also like the pyschological tidbit of the Shadows/Heartless being people who have allowed darkness/negativity into their hearts.

Really enjoyed this. Sucked me in with the makings of an epic adventure, two characters connected with a common tragic background united in a quest that is chivalric and seems to have mystical components. One note on description, from early in the chapter-sweat was described as pasty and able to feel which can be said of skin (whether sweaty or not), but I dont think sweat can be pasty and I am sure it cant feel.

Coming up to the final boss soon
I'm going to guess the Tabuu like entity will be Chernabog

All the chapters before Merida and Jack's meeting have vanished from the list
Or is that only a problem on my end?

Doh!
Incomplete story!
DOH!

Also, that little bit at the beginning of each chapter that describes the story as being kingdom hearts subspace emissary? That should be in the actual story description, rather than inserted in the actual chapter text.

Loving the story though. I am slightly disappointed that this did not turn out to be a Kingdom Hearts/Smash Bros crossover, but it is still a good story. Please finish it!

I love Beast. Peter Pan is kind of...obnoxious really, but the inner child in all of us. Of course being at work all day, I am more like the Beast. Belle and I would get along splendidly too. I LOOOOVE reading! Give me a comfy chair, a soft blanket, and a good book and I will not move for hours. *sigh*

Well, well, such an unlikely and yet perfect pairing...the princess of Dunbroch and the Master of Halloween. Also delighted to be wrong about the red ship belonging to Samus. Stitch and Mike Wazowski eh? Just keeps getting better and better!

Hmm...bright blue pixelated eyes, and a body like a white pill. That sounds an awful lot like EVA from the WALL-E movie.

Wow...so Queen Minnie got amiibo'd, King Mickey shot from cannon to who knows where, Peter Pan duped into charging Bowser's castle, and Jasmine and Donald are on their way to meet Samus. WHOO! Only three chapters in and it already has me on the edge of my seat. You're pretty good at writing!

will you add some characters from brother bear?