I thought this community was supposed to have no Mary sues and minimal OOCness. If you want to write a crappy unrealistic story, don't put it in the Akatsuki Fandom, and atleast put AU in the description. If you want to have an OP OC, don't make her OP in this way. If you're gonna give your character unrealistic powers, atleast first put OOCness and Mary sue warnings in the description, and the wholeething about her grandma being from the Naruto universe is both of those and also inconsistent, how come we've never heard off her? In that case you would have to put AU in the title to. There are so mny better ways to mmake your OCs stronger, just have a training arc or a timeskip, or have her get genetically modified. If you are such a big Itachi fan, you should know most of the hate him and the Uchiha get is from people saying they are only strong becausee they were lucky enough to be born into a family that offers superior training, more inate strenght and the strongest kekkei genkai to evr exist when at its final forrm, and as an Itachi fan you should look down on that, argue that Itachi also has superiorr intelect, but al you've done is make a character exactly like that, someone who had she not been lucky enough to have been born into the family she was, woud've been compeletely normal. Again, I'm fine with you making crappy stories, but put AU OOCness and Mary sues in the description, and on't put it in a community that specifically states to not have Mary sues and minimal OOCness.

Euh ? Who the hell do she thinks she's ? Why Audrey didn't said anything ?

Thank you! I hate when really good fanfictions become smuts... :(

At first I thought it was her that said "itachi...i will kill you" Then I was thinking in my head "wow, didn't know she was that pissed..." XD

Really, really good!

I like this story and the plot is good, but girl war thing and Ali acting like that is a bit dissatisfying. It spoils the story.

... But tobi is obito! Gosh, kishimoto really had us fooled didn't he?

Loving this already!

good story

A shame the sequel is discontinued at 4 chapters, i actually like, encourage, and have thought about having one oc going through different manga/anime one after another or some such. I like it anyway! :D

ahaha! this is pretty funny, i love this fanfic!
but i dont think i will finish reading it...im kind of lazy... but its a really nice story so far! but i guess i need to be productive huh...still working on my fanfictions...im just not shure wich ones to post or if i shuld delete some! D: oh well...ill figure something out :D nice job! i like it pretty well! :)

I LOVED IT SO :Dit was awesome!

Great story! I loved this idea. I was hoping the second part would be continued in the Naruto world but since it's Bleach next I can't complain. :)

HURRAY FOR REDNECKS! *is a redneck otaku* XDDD

I'm glad to know that you love your readers. And this reader would love it so very much if her new fave author would review her stories and leave tidbits of advice? As for Uchiha story the prologue needs to be rewritten so don't take it too seriously. I only put it up there because I got impatient.