This was AMAZING. It was cute and adorable while still be hot and smutty. It was a perfect balance of humor and adorableness and smut. I loved this so much. I got shivers when Josef missed the shot because of Mick. You got the characters so well, i can totally imagine all this happening. Very well written and just AMAZING. PERFECT. yes.

Very excellent very brilliant piece. Love it.

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lol, nice job! you somehow managed to make it cute AND smutty ;)

LOLOLOL the ending. Loved it! This was totally sexy. Nice work!

Peace Out! _

I like it. :) It's really hot, but sweet to. Good job. :)

Very Yummy!

O.o Wow, lol.

It was good, I loved it! I know what you mean about being nervous, because I have two slash ML fics that I haven't posted, but this is a good one. You should write another one. I'd read it!

For a one-shot (it is a pun if you notice) this is rather tasteful. Only I don't think Josef would have greeted Mick like that (kiss kiss and all that). And, yeah. I am a guy and I am liking it!

I absolutely love this!

Please you needa write more... XD

I love all your stories O.o

Um...this was the best thing ever...literally...that was so hot, and so cute! That is exactly how I picture their relationship too...aw...I want a fun night!

Thanks!

hell yes i liked it. who wouldn't like it? great job!

That was brilliant Silvanelf!

I love Mick and Josef getting all slushy with one another, and the 'cliches' were wonderful. I just knew Josef was going to say something about the damage to his pool table though!

You needn't have been nervous about posting it; it was great!

Besides being very hot, I love how comfortable they are with each other. Completely in character. Their deep, comfortable friendship comes through loud and clear. This is more than 'friends with benefits', this is love.

..and the rip off the shirt, leave the tie part was very funny.

one word HOT!