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Awwww omg I loved it so much!

Hell yeah. Way better than the movie. The only regret is how short it was.

very well done! If Nest happens to call give them my username and I'll back you up on this!

I love how you took what was a very annoying and stupid sequel to one of my favorite movies of all time and turned it into something that I would actually enjoy watching!

Derek's attitude towards Odette was very appropriate! I would imagine that he was somewhat of an over protector after the Rothbart thing. I liked that the henchman wasn't that mush for brains like in the movie. I also liked that you made the final fight scene a little more dramatic and that Odette DID NOT turn back into a Swan. I feel as if the poor girl had dealt with enough shape shifting in the first movie.

Great job, I really enjoyed reading this!

~ PrincessCricket

That was fantastic. Completely cheesy and adorable.D I found the movie really funny, but there wasn't consistency with Derick and Odette, but the rest like, jean-Bob and Uberta being locked up,oh my god, she had me cracking when I was younger!

Good to find lots of romance here haha. You really should do another one, I love the style. The only problem with it Is perhaps Odette being a little damsel-in-distress sort. I did wish she tried to do something when Derick was being attacked and all. I mean, when they were kids, lol all that punching and violence haha, where is it now? She's awesome anyway. And this certainly is good!)

okay let me start of dsying, you are a fantastic writer, god detailing and suspense and yeah the second movie was lame...but it had it good parts...though i was a little disapointed with your story, just two things...one i was dispointed when you didnt have odette turn into a swan...that it somewhat the point of the movie and i loved that part of the movie the captivating magic. And what happened to puffin, John Bob, and speed? Those are some of the main characters. Well anyway, very well written story thebest I've read out of the series yet. Thanks for sharing your ideas

Sorry for the long review...and i did really enjoy reading. XD Cant wait for the next!

i love it! i love you! please write more swan princess stories!

This was AMAZING! So so so much better than the film, even though I did like it - but this was fabulous!

I adored the romance between Derek and Odette. I always thought that there was never enough of it in the three movies.

Seriously, this was brilliant! Thank you!

You've changed Clavius' vharacter? Why? Hm. Your just a tad too liberal with the changes. If you wanted to revampo the movie, sure. Personally I liked the movie. Not as good as the first but down right better then the third. You didn't need to change Clavius' character, he aws interesting the way he was.

Ohwell. I read moer of it later when I have the chance. I do like what I am reading, it's more like a seperate story then a revamp. At least...so far it is, anyway.

Interesting so far.I kinda wish you'd made a key in the first chap in regards to character changes, if any. I mean, I like the way the movie set a trap for Derek in the first scene. But I do agree that a lot of things in the movie stunk. Not as much as the third one, of course. Ick. But anyway, I am very interested in where this leads.

God job so far.

I liked this a lot better than the movie. Are you planning to redo the third?

Why didn't they get you to write the movie? It would have been so much better this way! Another excellent fanfic!

Wo0t! That was freaking amazing! :D

Oh no! Poor Derek. The suspense is driving me nuts. This is good and I hope you update soon.

Instead of 'holder', you could use 'sconce.' I think it sounds a little bit more elegant, and probably the word you were originally searching for. :)

By the way, that's an evil cliffy to end the chapter on. ;)