Reviews for The Founding
Larenars chapter 10 . 6/21
Very interesting. I really enjoy your work.
James Birdsong chapter 10 . 5/14
Excellent ten chapters
keitaya chapter 10 . 4/9
Interesting... Different worlds, different magic.
I look forward to seeing more.
By the way, you forgot about the second parseltongue door. Harry would have had to open that too.
Guest chapter 9 . 3/30
Seems kind of dumb to say Harry needs to find his own allies because Lupin and Dumbledore may die and Harry has lost enough. The reason his allies would not be just as likely to die in a war is?
agnar chapter 1 . 3/29
you know, there were two parseltongue entries Harry would need to open. In the bathroom, then another beyond the rockslide, so despite what Snape said, Harry *would* need to come down with them.
McPenname chapter 9 . 9/14/2019
Would love to see this updated. I am very intrigued and want to know what happens next
kewr69 chapter 9 . 12/17/2015
Great story
Guest chapter 9 . 11/23/2015
Existing contracts. For example, they had a contact that ignored inflation for buying lands connected to the school grounds or something, and have a fixed price on it. Effectively steal the land, or threaten to anyways, with all the gold and properties of the wizarding world of Britain being held hostage. And because, yknow, magic, that could mess with ole moldy and his plans.

I mean I could imagine anne doing so, totally unscrupulous things that only might matter on the tiniest off chance that it would matter.

I'm not clear on your portrayal of mumbles, but that is potentially the hardest to factor. Mumble more has plenty of legit reasons to oppose the gang, in fact doing otherwise, I'd say, is unthinkable, no matter what kind of headmaster you have.

I like Snape. His reactions, outwardly, and inwardly, would be interesting. I also want to read a Prophet article on what was overheard. So much noise.

Also, while I'm pretty sure the crown didn't exist, an certainly didn't in structure or even bloodline at this point, considering the extreme parallel, that could factor in. Want to see the bloody royals get some notes. Hell, they don't even need to be the current family either.
Guest chapter 9 . 11/22/2015
Just read. Sad at 'delay' of story. Hope I'm right about second sentence.
Guest chapter 9 . 2/20/2015
oooo I love this story but its been 5 years and n update. I hate when arthors stop writing. I mean if you were paid for writing it would be different but since it's free fans get ripped off when someone decides to stop
Tigerwolvesvixen chapter 9 . 11/6/2013
very cool and aesome story please please continue am guessing the scooby gang was sent to te past wont that mean that when the teachers found the painting that there might be a dawn in that world as well sinced her being a key in all?
RoughIslandSunrise chapter 9 . 6/7/2013
Lol dumbles plans are acout to be ryined. Cant wait for thebupdate
slayer99 chapter 9 . 7/23/2012
wow this is really good
Nimbus Llewelyn chapter 9 . 3/18/2012
Interesting. Thoroughly odd, but interesting.
mattcun chapter 9 . 9/28/2011
plz write more
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